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I have 222 stories published in 10 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 221055 times and 142 of my stories have been cherry picked.
58 of my 585 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 60 votes

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Drew Gummerson

Author of Me and Mickie James (Jonathan Cape) and The Lodger (GMP), and many stories here and there. Follow me at @drewgum

My stories

Cherry

Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Saturday morning. Sick to the Bottom of your Bum.)

It is 515. The digits click. The alarm whines and you groan. For once the pain is not solely existential. Every time you close your eyes Eusavio is...
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Cherry

Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Saturday morning. Before you awake. Room Hopping.)

In this wretched life, it is only our petty animosities and small victories which help us get through the day. For, knowing someone is worse off than...
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Cherry

Friday Night at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday night. Your Love is King part 2)

“Are you crying?” You have made it. You are in your pink suit and you are in The Hot Top Bar and Grill. Eusavio is by your side. He is in a cropped...
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Cherry

Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday night. Your Love is King. Part 1.)

You are slumped over a table in The Commodore Club when you are shaken awake and you see a number of swirling Eusavios looking down at you. You think...
Gold cherry

Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel (Friday, at work. The Greatest Love of All. Polye Thylene.)

In the kitchen Angela, the kitchen manager, is standing with Amer, who you have christened Mersault from Camus’ The Outsider . They must be in a...

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58 of my comments have received 60 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this. The opening

Posted on Sat, 02 Nov 2019

I enjoyed this. The opening line is wonderful. Am I being thick? Are there two Severn Bridges?

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Posted in Travelling down the Wye Valley 28/10/19

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Great again.

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Great again.
 

You just need a sentence I think between '...in the same swamp' and 'You're not going to find....' to break up that big chunk of dialogue. 

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Posted in Jack Goes Nicholson Over the Aardark in his Wallet

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