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Author of Me and Mickie James (Jonathan Cape) and The Lodger (GMP), and many stories here and there. Follow me at @drewgum. Seven Nights At The Flamingo Hotel is coming November 2020. Pre-order here https://www.beardedbadgerpublishing.com/online-store
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I would flesh this out more.
Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021
I would flesh this out more. What was the room like? What did she look like? Not overdoing it.
And there is too much direct speech. Read it out. Does it sound the way someone speaks?
I like the story tho...Read full comment
Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3
It was in the days I had an
Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021
It was in the days I had an agent. I think I was trying to write a thriller....Read full comment
Well, I love Highsmith. She
Posted on Wed, 11 Aug 2021
Well, I love Highsmith. She wouldn't fare well in the twitter-verse these days. She didn't like people very much. But was fond of snails. And was known to attend parties with a bagful of them....
Her first book was Strangers on a Train....Read full comment
Posted in Danger Mouse