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43 of my 471 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 43 votes
43 of my comments have received 43 Great Feedback votes
Thanks. Although still
Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2019
Thanks. Although still writing I'd been feeling down and very self critical about everything I was doing. This last few months posting stuff on here and getting nice comments has given me a huge boost. I've finished Flamingo Hotel and have...Read full comment
Posted in MovieLand! (A Christmas Story. Part 1)
A great piece about awkward
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019
A great piece about awkward desire.
And there are too many mentions of her nose, which is both turned-up and button? Is that possible? Or maybe you have a nose thing. Like Murakami with his ears. If so, that's fine...Read full comment
Posted in From Jester To King XI
The story's all there but I
Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2019
The story's all there but I think the twist is too much of a twist. I'd get Charlie in right in the first line. 'Alfred could love or leave his family but Charlie was his mate...' or something like that. And I'd give the impression that Janet was...Read full comment
Posted in Where The Hell is Charlie?
Thanks for your comments.
Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2019
Thanks for your comments. Part 2 is edited. And I've even looked ahead to Friday. Only three days left of the Seven at the Flamingo Hotel. I can't believe this thing I'd given up on and discarded is now nearing completion. That's thanks to ABC...Read full comment