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I have 45 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 23335 times and 6 of my stories have been cherry picked.
4 of my 76 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 4 votes

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Odyssey of a Prodigal Stepson Chapeter 04 (rewrite)

Jamie and his stepbrother Harvey took their pet dog, Koromaru for a walk. Along the way, Jamie collected a camera from one of their teachers, Mrs...

Odyssey of a Prodigal Stepson Part Three (rewrite)

Recap: Jamie was thrown into thorns by bullies at a local park becasue he refused to give them the name of the person that got them into trouble...

Odyssey of a Prodigal Stepson Part Two Re-write

Previous: Jamie was thrown into the prickles and thorns in Sparks park by bullies. This was a penalty for withholding informaton about someone that...

Odyssey of a Prodigal Stepson Part One Rewrite

Authors note: After re-reading this saga, I have come to the conclusion that it is a bit too random; and needs restructuring. Thus I have been...
Cherry

Absent Without Leave

An A to Z story accounting the effects of the absence of a loved one during Christmas Another Christmas had come and gone, but Jason’s present still...

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4 of my comments have received 4 Great Feedback votes

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Really liked this one

Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021

Hi mark_yelland-brown

Really liked your graveyard poem. It is often hard to let go and we visit our loved one's memorials and talk to them because is is easier on our hearts to believed they still here. 

I work   at a local cemetery...

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Posted in Daisy, Sitting on a Grave

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The fall of the house of kitten

Posted on Sat, 05 Dec 2020

Hi Grace77

The things we do in the line of duty for our feline overloards. You were lucky not to have hurt yourself but please be more careful in the future; watch your footing because it may not turn out the same way next time. 

I...

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Posted in "He Will Not Let You Fall."

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Awesome poem about awesomeness

Posted on Fri, 06 Jul 2012

It seems everything these days is described as awesome. That music, movie, book, television series, sandwich, poem, story, article, phone and space cowboy from alpha centauri; they're all awesome.  Perhaps it is a special, magic age, or people...

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Posted in Awesome?

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I sympathise with your

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016

I sympathise with your problem Jennifer. There are many factors at work here that seem to be causing your insomnia. As far as I can tell with the info you have supplied one of the main reasons you maybe finding it hard to get to sleep is because...

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Posted in Dreamland