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I have 59 stories published in 8 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 29028 times and 7 of my stories have been cherry picked.
6 of my 87 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 6 votes

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A Centipede went to K-mart

A centipede went to Kmart, For one thousand pairs of shoes. She chose all different colours; Reds, and whites, and blues. She also bought spare laces...

Odyssey of a Prodigal Stepson Part 11 (Rewrite)

Recap: Jamie was accused of Poisoning Koromaru, the family dog owned by the family that adopted him. A major confrontation arose between his...

Gobbles Has Gone Awol

A Dialog only story featuring Billy, Sasha and thier father “Any sign of Gobbles, Daddy?” “I’m afraid not, Sasha.” “He’s probably in someone’s oven...

The Little Masketeer

A Dialog only story between Billy and his father about the need to wear a mask to school. “Listen Billy, you need to wear your mask at school today...

Covid’s Conscientious Objectors

The purpose of this article is not to trivialize the virus, or even champion the whims of conspiracy theorists. It is to give a rational voice to...

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6 of my comments have received 6 Great Feedback votes

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Something wicked this way comes.

Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021

I liked part two. especailly the special postman/postbird. I think Willow is right to be suspicious of Perfidia. There seems to be something odd about that tea. 

Found a typo you may wish to address "Was there no chance for a relaxing...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 2

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A fury familiar Familiar

Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021

I like black cats and Willow seems like a really interesting one. She seems to like things as they are and not too keen on changes.but I am guessing things are about to take an unexpected turn. I am looking forward to continuing with this as your...

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Posted in "Willow's Tail"

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Really liked this one

Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021

Hi mark_yelland-brown

Really liked your graveyard poem. It is often hard to let go and we visit our loved one's memorials and talk to them because is is easier on our hearts to believed they still here. 

I work   at a local cemetery...

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Posted in Daisy, Sitting on a Grave

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The fall of the house of kitten

Posted on Sat, 05 Dec 2020

Hi Grace77

The things we do in the line of duty for our feline overloards. You were lucky not to have hurt yourself but please be more careful in the future; watch your footing because it may not turn out the same way next time. 

I...

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Posted in "He Will Not Let You Fall."

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Awesome poem about awesomeness

Posted on Fri, 06 Jul 2012

It seems everything these days is described as awesome. That music, movie, book, television series, sandwich, poem, story, article, phone and space cowboy from alpha centauri; they're all awesome.  Perhaps it is a special, magic age, or people...

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I sympathise with your

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016

I sympathise with your problem Jennifer. There are many factors at work here that seem to be causing your insomnia. As far as I can tell with the info you have supplied one of the main reasons you maybe finding it hard to get to sleep is because...

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Posted in Dreamland