Ray Schaufeld

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I have 110 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 262846 times and 77 of my stories have been cherry picked.
186 of my 2,166 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 187 votes

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Cherry

Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London

I am so glad that I live In Devon. Every other member of my family and pretty much everyone who is close to them lives in London. Mainly North London...
Gold cherry

2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

It wasn't my first time working with people who had become homeless. It was 22 years after. I was now 43, working in Exeter not Belfast. The system...
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Sun Song

The food, the flowers, the family, the friends Morrie and Joan's back garden when a child, The suburbs of North London. Today - a sunny Devon garden...
Cherry

Craigmillar

'I would rather spend three years in Craigmillar Castle than three weeks in Craigmillar' - the Other Alternative Edinburgh ed. and compiled by RES
Cherry

Wanton Wanting

(Reposted from 3 years ago) My lotus eating fantasies that fire my body but shirk the possibilities of flesh and blood I want not. My ragged boys and...

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186 of my comments have received 187 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent.There is a lot in

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2017

Excellent.There is a lot in this section, interweaving themes, music, locality, memory, history, relationships, ghosts that will not release you. Pascal has two marriages, to Emer and also to Dundalk. He is now renewing his vows

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Posted in CC 115: Schubert

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This feels 'right there',

Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2017

This feels 'right there', both parts of your poem, Rhiannon. I hope you are making a booklet of your children's poems they often remind me of A.A. Milne in a good way.

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Posted in School Absence, Home Presence

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Short and good, as always

Posted on Thu, 02 Mar 2017

Short and good, as always with your best Nature writing you make me want to be there, Rhiannon.

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Posted in Wild Daffodil Wood

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I found this very worthwhile

Posted on Fri, 24 Feb 2017

I found this very worthwhile reading. My home life when I was young was unhappy in different ways from yours and yet there is stuff I can relate to. I was seen as less good than my parents and my sister as they were insecure and it made them feel...

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Posted in A familiar through-line

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Salvation sounds good,

Posted on Sun, 19 Feb 2017

Salvation sounds good, Rhiannon.

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Posted in ‘Every eye shall see him’*

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Good advice.

Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017

Good advice.

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Posted in You want to leave a legacy?

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Yes, it can happen, malice

Posted on Sat, 11 Feb 2017

Yes, it can happen, malice can meltsmiley

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Posted in Heat or Warm

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Good topical poem, Rhiannon.

Posted on Thu, 02 Feb 2017

Good topical poem, Rhiannon. The last stanza is a wake-up call to all of us.

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Posted in Terminological Inexactitudes

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Good fun. Your poem makes a

Posted on Sat, 12 Nov 2016

Good fun. Your poem makes a humorous point about image and identity. I am not sure why you rated it age 18 ( it does not contain any truly horrible images of war or of the uglier sides of sexual relationships and more people might read it if you...

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Posted in Star Struck

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Educational, lively fun.

Posted on Tue, 24 Jan 2017

Educational, lively fun. smiley

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Posted in Bugs, bugs, and more bugs

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