Heat or Warm

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 11 Feb 2017

4 comments

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Love was hurt
and turned to hate,
hot hatred burned
as hate returned:
inflamed.

Malice melted
by act
of kindness, love
– warm impact:
ashamed.

[IP:prose or poetry around the theme of love and/or hate]

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Permalink Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on Sun, 2017-02-12 09:34

Yes, it can happen, malice can melt

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Sun, 2017-02-12 12:49

Thanks, Elsie. True, better to try to melt than inflame. Rhiannon

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Thu, 2017-02-16 15:09

Like the way you wrote this I P Rhiannon.

Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Thu, 2017-02-16 15:43

Thanks, Jenny. Rhiannon