Ray Schaufeld

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I have 110 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 260287 times and 77 of my stories have been cherry picked.
186 of my 2,166 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 187 votes

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Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2

‘We’ve given you all the advantages, all the advantages’ That’s not Les’ old man, it’s mine – his favourite war cry when the old girl cranked up his...
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Les Rowse, Philippe and I

‘I have no use for the great heart of the people. Or rather that is about all of theirs I have any use for: their emotional life, its depth and...
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Twigs and Toads

Memories of a 6 year old Psychiatric Outpatient

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remember Amanda that day Helen’s Bay when we ran from the House and the work and the stress and the slowrattle train all the stops oldseat carriage...
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186 of my comments have received 187 Great Feedback votes

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'The fourth craw he wisnae

Posted on Fri, 26 May 2017

'The fourth craw he wisnae there at 'aa' (from a Scottish children's song).I am going to come back to this piece again. I have a much too part-time job teaching creative writing to adults. Many have a struggle grasping person, point of view and...

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Posted in Taking the Fourth

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Wow! I shall e-mail Dad

Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017

Wow! I shall e-mail Dad prontosmiley

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Posted in Shlamek

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Wish I was there

Posted on Wed, 03 May 2017

Wish I was theresmiley

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Posted in on the Coast path 2/5/17

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very good but very very

Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2017

very good but very very puzzling. Aren't you are a modifying adjective that doesn't know it's place? Yours, 'pretty' vacant.

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Posted in Adverb Angst

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Yes, when the big wheel stops

Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2017

Yes, when the big wheel stops still you learn who your friends are...

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Posted in Merry-go-round

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Rhiannon this is a great

Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2017

Rhiannon this is a great piece of loving reality.

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Posted in ‘Where is your home?’

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An enigmatic mix of past and

Posted on Wed, 22 Mar 2017

An enigmatic mix of past and present, If you wrote this with a flesh and blood person in mind I hope they enjoyed it too.Or is it about the need to be alone coupled with the need to be part of society. Either way, it works.

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Posted in Society

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I voted remain too. I did not

Posted on Fri, 24 Mar 2017

I voted remain too. I did not study the matter too deeply but I felt then and I still feel now that is is better for England to remain part of Europe than for us to become an isolated clapped out little country out here on our own.The first...

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Posted in Is this what our politics have become?

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Warm hearted as well as

Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017

Warm hearted as well as handling the matter of fact have-tos. As an early morning person I liked the timing. The lady in the shop is a good cameo and may also work well as the subject for a poem or short story. Your Dad and his porridge and the...

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Posted in 1500 Paces

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Lovely real-seeming

Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017

Lovely real-seeming storytelling

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Posted in The border of earth

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