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‘We’ve given you all the advantages, all the advantages’ That’s not Les’ old man, it’s mine – his favourite war cry when the old girl cranked up his...
186 of my comments have received 187 Great Feedback votes
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'The fourth craw he wisnae
Posted on Fri, 26 May 2017
'The fourth craw he wisnae there at 'aa' (from a Scottish children's song).I am going to come back to this piece again. I have a much too part-time job teaching creative writing to adults. Many have a struggle grasping person, point of view and...
An enigmatic mix of past and present, If you wrote this with a flesh and blood person in mind I hope they enjoyed it too.Or is it about the need to be alone coupled with the need to be part of society. Either way, it works.
I voted remain too. I did not study the matter too deeply but I felt then and I still feel now that is is better for England to remain part of Europe than for us to become an isolated clapped out little country out here on our own.The first...
Warm hearted as well as handling the matter of fact have-tos. As an early morning person I liked the timing. The lady in the shop is a good cameo and may also work well as the subject for a poem or short story. Your Dad and his porridge and the...
'The fourth craw he wisnae
Posted on Fri, 26 May 2017
'The fourth craw he wisnae there at 'aa' (from a Scottish children's song).I am going to come back to this piece again. I have a much too part-time job teaching creative writing to adults. Many have a struggle grasping person, point of view and...
Read full commentPosted in Taking the Fourth
Wow! I shall e-mail Dad
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Wow! I shall e-mail Dad pronto
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
Wish I was there
Posted on Wed, 03 May 2017
Wish I was there
Read full commentPosted in on the Coast path 2/5/17
very good but very very
Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2017
very good but very very puzzling. Aren't you are a modifying adjective that doesn't know it's place? Yours, 'pretty' vacant.
Read full commentPosted in Adverb Angst
Yes, when the big wheel stops
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2017
Yes, when the big wheel stops still you learn who your friends are...
Read full commentPosted in Merry-go-round
Rhiannon this is a great
Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2017
Rhiannon this is a great piece of loving reality.
Read full commentPosted in ‘Where is your home?’
An enigmatic mix of past and
Posted on Wed, 22 Mar 2017
An enigmatic mix of past and present, If you wrote this with a flesh and blood person in mind I hope they enjoyed it too.Or is it about the need to be alone coupled with the need to be part of society. Either way, it works.
Read full commentPosted in Society
I voted remain too. I did not
Posted on Fri, 24 Mar 2017
I voted remain too. I did not study the matter too deeply but I felt then and I still feel now that is is better for England to remain part of Europe than for us to become an isolated clapped out little country out here on our own.The first...
Read full commentPosted in Is this what our politics have become?
Warm hearted as well as
Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017
Warm hearted as well as handling the matter of fact have-tos. As an early morning person I liked the timing. The lady in the shop is a good cameo and may also work well as the subject for a poem or short story. Your Dad and his porridge and the...
Read full commentPosted in 1500 Paces
Lovely real-seeming
Posted on Sat, 18 Mar 2017
Lovely real-seeming storytelling
Read full commentPosted in The border of earth
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