Ray Schaufeld

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I have 110 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 463965 times and 77 of my stories have been cherry picked.
178 of my 2,043 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 178 votes

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Shlamek

Written some years ago by my father Abraham Schaufeld
Cherry

Mum, when?

A twisted tale of love and politics
Cherry

Anne and Martin

'Anne, where are you off to tonight?' 'I'll not be long, Marie.' ' She's out a lot these days.' She's always busy, always happy.' ​ ​Marie returned...
Cherry

Spring

Spring marches in Daffodils shine, rising like saints To the strong slow pulse Of the pale foggy sun. Sap rises, Life surprises Our budding, opening...

A Cancelled Passport

'You're wearing a suit and tie!' Mr Peter Francis Lockyer. Place of birth Exeter. Occupation student - scored out - new occupation travel broker. 'I...

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178 of my comments have received 178 Great Feedback votes

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Good description of Mitchell

Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2016

Good description of Mitchell House. Dialogue moves the story forward fluently. Who isss the ssscribbling ssssserpent? Emer?

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Posted in CC 70: Serpents, Ultimately

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'You are sorry as always'. I

Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015

'You are sorry as always'. I left 2 relationships when the good times ran out, both times in the early stages of pregnancy. I also volunteered ar the Stirling refuge while expecting my elder daughter. Yes, the 'sorry' can be heartfelt. But it's...

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Posted in Happy families

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Yes! I want to be there.

Posted on Fri, 11 Nov 2016

Yes! I want to be there.

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Posted in Bright November Late Afternoon

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Visual and informative,

Posted on Mon, 31 Oct 2016

Visual and informative, Rhiannon. I love the colours.

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Posted in Autumn Colours (i)

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King Harald Hardrada

Posted on Tue, 25 Oct 2016

King Harald Hardrada

Was like Harold Godwinson only harder

Not content with the rule of Norway alone

He made unsuccessful attempts on the Danish and English throne.

 

(Clerihews are fun, aren't they...

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Posted in KING HAROLD GODWINSON

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Yes,I remember watching Yes

Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2016

Yes,I remember watching Yes Minister. Nice summarisation, Rhiannon.

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Posted in 4) Yes Minister!

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Good fun. I want some of that

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

Good fun. I want some of that fishy pie.

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Posted in Owl and the Pussycat

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I like It!

Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2016

I like It!

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Posted in 2) Ringo

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Rhiannon,I like the way this

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015

Rhiannon,I like the way this has some of the Winnie-the-Pooh thoughtfulness and a view of the wider world too.

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Posted in Halfway Through the Night

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Ooh, one of those fictional

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2015

Ooh, one of those fictional tales which seems almost too real. Saleable too, one to try the mags with. And yes Lindy this shower of so-called friends re-united say plenty!

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Posted in Old Girls

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