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I have 2149 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5472454 times and 674 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1543 of my 13,340 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1590 votes

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Sticky Tangles

The spider spins its sticky silk a web to weave to catch its prey; but she who spins to weave …

Aslan – picture of Incarnation

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Could a god become a lion? – a powerful, rideable lion? Could a supernatural Spirit become a man to visit?...
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Oh, for Stirrings and Softenings!

Could there be some stirring in those hearts of hate those hearts as hard as slate, so cold? Could glimmers of care and love begin, unfold, and...
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“Mary pondered these things in her heart”*

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] – what she heard from the shepherds … properly think now about what you hear …
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2026

A new year, a new leaf, a new calendar: we are here, time is brief – how and whither shall we wander? …

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1543 of my comments have received 1590 Great Feedback votes

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Quite apart from where your

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

Quite apart from where your bigger story is going, this is an interesting exploration of how boys, maybe having been bulllied, venturing in, egging each other on, into flexing their bullying muscles, and how easily it can escalate to their harm...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

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So difficult to describe

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

So difficult to describe those swirling hues! draped and languorous seem good adjectives.

Seems odd to connect them to watching angels servants, but I see the imagery can be thought of that way, Rhiannon

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Posted in Borealis

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She certainly seemed to have

Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025

She certainly seemed to have been very pleased to meet you. My first contact here on the site with her was when one of my very early pieces I posted was 'Seashore' for kids, and she made a nice comment! Rhiannon

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Posted in Our Old Girl… Remembering Coral

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Well drawn. I just

Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2025

Well drawn. I just happeed to be reading a little detective story a couple of days ago that had a similar situation very unexpected so I did suddenly suspect, but not long before the end! Rhiannon

PS I thought the concept of 'I want my...

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Posted in Do angels deserve to die?

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Must have been hard for your

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025

Must have been hard for your mother. She sounds very committed to you over it. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Deaf Girl Living In A Hearing World - Chapter Two.

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that's thoughtful. Of course,

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025

that's thoughtful. Of course, sometimes, it works the other way too — the one feeling sensitive is unconsciously misjudging others herself too! Need encouragement to show interest and find that helps others to show interest in them. Rhiannon

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Posted in Red

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Very visual, relaxing scene!

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Very visual, relaxing scene! Rhiannon

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Posted in Riverside

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What a lovely place to be,

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

What a lovely place to be, what a lovely walk! And all recorded in mind and paper/computer. Thank you. Rhiannon

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Posted in before Floris

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What a good twist! Finding a

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2025

What a good twist! Finding a needy audience/group in need of his music! Rhiannon

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Posted in The secret life of Pizzly Bears

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Intriguing. Rhiannon

Posted on Tue, 29 Jul 2025

Intriguing. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 3

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