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“Your kingdom come”

You do not feel God near, but know he sees and knows and understands, and soon you’ll hear his voice, freed from your woes. In awe of all his power...

The lesser light

What a wonderful moon we have: silvery glow – we watch it grow and shrink, rise and glide, and slowly sink calm for lovers and travellers’ guide in...
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Stopped in their tracks

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Stunned by the clarity, stopped in their tracks, speaks with authority – wisdom attracts. Wise, good and...

When is a pipe a tu_ _?

… it’s an underground train. Some people call it a ‘pipe’ ”. !
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No longer gold

Coal has been gold in winter’s cold: red flames to warm in chill of storm. In cities smoke collected to choke, so coal that was mined was mostly...

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778 of my comments have received 803 Great Feedback votes

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Don't feel you have to do

Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021

Don't feel you have to do rhymes. It can be useful and a challenge, but in the end you'll know what is best for you, and what you feel works in these. They are very cocentrated anyway.. And it can vary from verse to verse! Rhiannon

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Posted in H is for Holly (for sale and for song)

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I hadn't really noticed that

Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021

I hadn't really noticed that you are rhyming your couplets, which is a good sign that it is unobtrusive and natural, biut helping the impact.

Holly does seem to last well indoors,bnut I think I prefer  it without the glitter, and...

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Posted in H is for Holly (for sale and for song)

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I was surprised it was such a

Posted on Wed, 08 Dec 2021

I was surprised it was such a complicated will. Rhiannon

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 16

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Well imagined and so sad. If

Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021

Well imagined and so sad. If she truly prayed, she would have been helped even in the dying. So much deceit and gullability. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Journey. Part One.

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A lot of thought going into

Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021

A lot of thought going into these, Di, and making people think! I see you have collected them into an alphabet. It's interesing that there are 26 letters in our alphabet. I had a go at verse with starting with each letter per day in 2018. But I...

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Posted in F is for Fairy Lights and Frost

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I too had missed this somehow

Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021

I too had missed this somehow, and was glad to find it highlighted.

The walk description was very evocative and peaceful, and the panic so clearly described and reminiscent. I think my incident in mind was my husband walking on a little,...

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Posted in Trail Of Misunderstanding

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This is so interesting, and

Posted on Mon, 06 Dec 2021

This is so interesting, and interestingly written. 

I suppose the problem is partly the demand of those living now in cities leading to 'mass production' of fuel source, by mechanically logging a lot at once, rather than the regular small...

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Posted in Copse and Robbers

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Neat adn thoughtful. Rhiannon

Posted on Sat, 04 Dec 2021

Neat adn thoughtful. Rhiannon

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Posted in D is for Dove (Decoration and Real)

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Like Di, I particularly liked

Posted on Sat, 04 Dec 2021

Like Di, I particularly liked that first descriptive stanza. Must be a lovely corner to follow through the seasons. Rhiannon

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Posted in Nature's Hideaway

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The sleekness of ash tree

Posted on Thu, 02 Dec 2021

The sleekness of ash tree branches is so lovely, isn't it? and their lovely greyness with the black buds. Is it meant to be moonsliver or moonsliver? Rhiannnon

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Posted in A is for Angel and Ash Tree

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