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I have 2059 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4492175 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1504 of my 13,165 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1547 votes

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Longing to Belong

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Estrangement, distance, alienation, suspiciousness between each nation; in family, and friendships’ strain:...
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Daffodil

[this poem is based on/inspired by/semi-translation of a Welsh poem by I D Hooson (1880-1948)] I saw you in the wild, dancing … I saw you in a vase, still …
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Waiting now, but still glad to comfort

“Come, sit on my lap’,” said the old lady, her legs now fragile and thin, her mind back in youth and the enjoyment to a tired child she could bring...
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The Great Exchange!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The One who had no sin at all took on our sin to save us, and so he bore its judgement full – his...
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Cherry

Hear, think, speak!

His mind directs his vocal chords, vibrations emanate. They reach an ear, and so his words its tunnel permeate The ear-drum trembles – tiny bones the...

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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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I always enjoy your scenic

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025

I always enjoy your scenic and nature descriptions, Paul. You seem to have a good noticing eye for detail, and memory of many scenes, which I enjoy reading though not fond of fantasy or magic (except when there can seem to be allegorical...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)

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Nicely constructed, gentle

Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025

Nicely constructed, gentle and thoughtful. I don't know much about trade winds and their effect though? Rhiannon

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Posted in After the Geese

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I held his hand. For all the

Posted on Fri, 18 Jul 2025

I held his hand. For all the dysfunction, he was still my father. Still a man. Still afraid.

That means a lot in the middle of the muddled relationship and lack of empathy, and increasing confusion. Poor man. I guess there is more...

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Posted in After Geneva

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Horrible picture of 'being

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

Horrible picture of 'being put in your place' and 'getting your cumuppance'! No way back, either! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Irritating Gentleman (part two)

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I enjoyed the flow of I've

Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025

I enjoyed the flow of I've put my life on TikTok instagrammatic-ly.  ! Rhiannon

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Posted in 3 oz of Insanity

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A nice turnaround. Rhiannon

Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2025

A nice turnaround. Rhiannon

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Posted in Here I am

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Even when planned and

Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2025

Even when planned and prepared for, Children are always unexpected.

So easy to forget children's personality needs work to get to know as you nurture and teach endeavouring to love, understand and communicate not frustrate!...

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Posted in Some Birthday thoughts on the 2nd of July

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How sad she feels she has

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2025

How sad she feels she has nothing to give or do. An awareness of life given can help perseverance and some satisfaction and purpose, looking outwards and upwards. Rhiannon

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Posted in Where The Sea Might Take Me

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Catching, recording in your

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2025

Catching, recording in your mind, and in words maybe better than a shaky, hasty film could have been!

So much of drama around, and even the glimpse we see of the terrible, we have no knowledge of much of the detail that is occurring — and...

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Posted in The Fox and the Siamese

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Enjoying the present mixed

Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025

Enjoying the present mixed with the memories it stirs, and the pleasure of writing about some of them. Rhiannon

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Posted in When Time Has Elapsed

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