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16 collections on the site.
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Night Help
Slowly, silently, the lamplight falls here and there as the farmer strolls back from the barn where the soft beams lit the struggles as ewe and man...
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Working together
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Youth with strength and fresh new vision, ready, speedy hands and feet. Those grown older, tired and slower cannot with their speed compete. …
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Digging up dirt
Many gladly dig, revealing others’ sins, their own concealing; don’t consider pressures past trivialising sins which now leave all aghast. But now,...
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Open House
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] No room in the inn for the birth of the child, will you give him room?… There’s room in his heaven for all who perceive … There's room in his arms …
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Autobiography (but not mine!)
I buzzed round in the cloud, clung to some of my kind …
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Wow! so there's a lot of
Posted on Thu, 08 Feb 2024
Wow! so there's a lot of backstory and history here. I hope he's really left it behind, he still seems to know how to act hard. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in New Directions (11)
Hopefully she will gradually
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024
Hopefully she will gradually settle and find the surroundings and people interesting, and her memories of before becoming more hazy, she will become content and happy though maybe still feeling confused. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Home
It would be better to own up
Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024
It would be better to own up to his boss, as he had intended straightening things out, I'd think. Leaving it it might look worse later if he was found out, and it would help for them to sort this forger out together? Rhiannon
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The last two lines are lovely
Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024
The last two lines are lovely. But am I right in thinking this is an occasion of scattering ashes? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in We Watched from the Shore
I like to think I think like
Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024
I like to think I think like a child, but, I'm always slow on riddles and puns. It was nice to see the simplicity seen by Joey, nice clue. And yes, the dialogue is very readable. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 4
I don't think I'd enjoy
Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024
I don't think I'd enjoy visiting ancient buildings, espcially highly decorative, but can appreciate the work that has gone into them. I tend ot prefer ruins and open countryside!, but buildings give a guide to the history of the people. Nations (...
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I like having the chapters
Posted on Thu, 01 Feb 2024
I like having the chapters this legnth.Enough to absorb and doesn't need too long time commitment each time! Rhiannon
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That's a perceptive comment,
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
That's a perceptive comment, and I guess it is why I love being drawn to notice these things that still are there to be seen, as you say honed down to the basic shape of the branches, tree trunks etc, and as the plant covering is less and weak,...
Read full commentPosted in January Skies
This story must take a lot of
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
This story must take a lot of working out, to write each stage carefully, not rushed, patiently working forward at right pace. Rhiannon
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That sounds a wonderful
Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024
That sounds a wonderful exploration of the market: sounds, smells and sight, and conversations. The photos on flicker are amazing and very clear. Rhiannon
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