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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2536320 times and 535 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Probability, possibility, evidence

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] ‘Probably there is no God,’ some say.… ‘– but possibly there is a God?’ … ‘Why does He not …?’ …
Cherry

Fixing the calendar

One hour lost in Spring, in autumn found again! and every year …progressing problem, so …
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Cherry

Clehonger to Ruckhall Circular

24/2/24 I do like 3-dimensional walks, with ups and downs (though the ups not too long, but bringing new views throughout the little walk). We hadn’t...

Happy families!

Whine, whine, rain or shine – I never refuse to do as I’m told, but I grumble and whine, and shuffle my feet (and take plenty of time) until …
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Some Transient, some Permanent

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Happiness – elusive gift from life’s burdens bringing lift, limited when based on …

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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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Trying to see where you're

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment,  but just like the prophecies concerning his first...

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Stephen, I don't manage to

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...

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Posted in Shadow Cooking

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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Best that it's going to be

Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024

Best that it's going to be all our in the open. I hope she's going to be OK, with delayed shock as well as the hammering. Have they taken anything? Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (16)

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This is a bit of fun, taking

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024

This is a bit of fun, taking on a mouse-view in your wander! Though I do wonder whether mice do like to get wet or whether they shelter. Cats don't like rain do they? regards, Rhiannon

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Posted in Wild Side Of April

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A metaphor for the Light and

Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2024

A metaphor for the Light and hope that we may only notice and grasp when it is, partly and temporarily, taken away.

I was hopeing those glasses were genuine strong enough ones. They should be at that price I shouod think! Rhiannon

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Posted in Eclipse

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Thank you for drawing

Posted on Sun, 07 Apr 2024

Thank you for drawing attention to those two songs. I hadn't heard of them, and googled the lyrics to read. So good to know they are out there to be heard and read often! Rhiannon

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Posted in Holy Forever.

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An interesting idea that she

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

An interesting idea that she is kept away from possible danger and uprising, but doesns't understand and feels bitterness that  'life' is passing her by? Rhiannon

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Posted in In A Troubled Land

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Lovely twist and very

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

Lovely twist and very believable! Rhiannon

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Posted in Dad's poet society

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A vivid insight into your

Posted on Tue, 02 Apr 2024

A vivid insight into your enjoyment of the new 'home'. The final line was very striking! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Place in the Sun

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