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The Better Bargain!
Full river – soothing progress steady slow gentle ripples in the flow clear waters: still and quiet all around — not like the ‘Saturday Black Friday...
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Suffocating Falseness
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Like a fish out of water that’s gasping for breath so many thirst, hunger – they’re desperate for truth. Yet...
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More — or less?
Oliver Twist came some kids to meet, to ask if they’d had enough to eat …
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Pasture-Cleaners
Beetles that roll up balls of their favourite food source … cattle imported but their poo wasn’t suited to the native dung beetles …
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Used by God, though in prison
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Imprisoned, the apostle could no longer go out preaching the gospel for others to know. Friends visited:...
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Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
You do seem to be able to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Read full commentThen suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...
Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four
Welcome, you are new here,
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of 'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'
Personally I would have liked a...
Read full commentPosted in The Embrace
This reminded me of when my
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...
Read full commentPosted in The Discovered Unartist
Trying to see where you're
Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014
Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment, but just like the prophecies concerning his first...
Read full commentPosted in Broken Faith
Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
Read full commentPosted in No Ties (IP)
Entertainment for the
Posted on Fri, 17 Jan 2025
Entertainment for the tourists! and profitable too for organisers and town! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Golden Fleece (Ghost Walk) Part Two of Two
So sorry. This all seems to
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
So sorry. This all seems to have happened so quickly for you. Having good memories of course makes it harder. May the Lord comfort you and help you to rest in Him, and quietly trust for the coming day. much love, Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Silence"
'Freedom of speech' is being
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
'Freedom of speech' is being reinterpreted as 'as long as you agree with what we think should be true', and 'no discussion allowed'. Sadly much wisdom being misunderstood and turned away from to what will proved destrimental and harmful. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Phoenix 2030 (a dream)
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