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That’s where I was when I wrote it down …!
When you read a verse or song you once composed, maybe so long a time ago, does it bring back the scene described, or sometimes have a knack to...
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Good Seed
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The seed of God’s truth falls into good ground, is watered by thought: fruit soon will abound. Grows up to...
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Colours for Kids 11)
Bananas and daffodils, egg yolk and butter …
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A jewel, a flower and a friend
Sharp and shiny …incorruptible … expensive jewel … Soft and tender, fragile … soothing … warm and smiling: transient beauty … exquisite flower …
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We need a new earth
… However much our world puts right pollution, wars, can’t clear all blight …
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Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
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Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
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It sounds like cycling makes
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
It sounds like cycling makes you notice things, as well as getting fresh air and relaxation, but the slightly greater speed seems to give quite a different experience from walking, as 'things' are passed more quickly and so more of them in the...
Read full commentPosted in Prevarication Saturday
You do keep the reader with
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
You do keep the reader with you in your writing, Jean, and engagingly frank in your clear memories of young friendships and exploring understanding the boys you meet! Rhiannon
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You always have a way with
Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2019
You always have a way with words, Jane. But I would long to bring some Spring into these lives not just 'enjoy' their described tense and fragile cold. It seems like where existentialism leads, but we weren't made for that and need that 'God-...
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Walking with you through the
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
Walking with you through the skeleton is effectively done.
But because we do not need the death of a whale to survive, we can forget that others have probably in the past, especially at a time when they were in abundance in our oceans....
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You bring the walk to life
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
You bring the walk to life for all the senses! And encourage to notice all the little things around, with interest and pleasure. On Saturday we were on the hills (also without rain!) and encountered a little group of cubs and their leaders, the...
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Thankyou, Di, very much.
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
Thankyou, Di, very much.
No, I don't remember all of the origins and occasions of my writing. But there are some things that stick a bit, and occasions I have long remembered certain words or phrases coming to complete a line better etc,...
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Don't worry about anything,
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
Don't worry about anything, just wondered about the 'peel' in the last line, but I think I see itis probably that enclosing the words/thoughts that they need to escape from, or basically the same as the vowels colouring - which I hadn't thought...
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A clever interweaving,
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
A clever interweaving, flowing of these linked beautiful shades. I wasn't sure I understood the last line correctly. As there's no full-stop, I wondered if it is finished? [Appeal - a peel: pun?] Rhiannon
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