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Little-used public footpath

a vast sea of wheat … try not to wobble on unsteady feet!

Musical Associations X3

mother-in-law: She’s nearly 100, but remembers a tune her mother used to play and sing – can try to sing to me now – ‘De-dum, dum-dum …’ but can’t...

on Psalm 28

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] With hate in heart, they speak of peace, don’t care to ask for mercy, grace. But I do ask – don’t close your...
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Scenic Variations of the Wye

Curved meander of the Wye, cow parsley waving fringe, field of meadow buttercups, Canada geese here, swans there – then a bevy, one upending, then...

on Psalm 130

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] When desperate, to Jesus call, for nothing else can help at all: don’t want to quit, give up, so cry – ‘I...
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423 of my comments have received 427 Great Feedback votes

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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A lot of useful metaphor

Posted on Fri, 14 Jun 2019

A lot of useful metaphor going on here, Graham. Ties in with the parable again (though he did repent, just in time).

Fields of Gold are sewn With dreams corrupt The precious yellow fever Is hard to swallow Broken teeth, broken dreams...

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Posted in Greed For Gold

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Is this autobiographical? A

Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019

Is this autobiographical? A broken back? A wolf? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Rain

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I don't know which I prefer,

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon

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Posted in Left Behind 2

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Very telling. And what after

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

Very telling. And what after all are hair/eye colours, even possible intellectual abilities? What of the child's needs when they are going to be awkward and need helpful direction and training to deal with their tempers and teenage angsts. The...

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Posted in Return To Sender

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I'm all for trying to reverse

Posted on Tue, 04 Jun 2019

I'm all for trying to reverse bad trends of unnecessary messing up of our earth for greed. But 'If only for this life we have hope in Christ, we are to be pitied more than all men'* and denying children the knowledge of that hope in the troubles...

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Posted in the train leaving now

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A helpful testimony to the

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019

A helpful testimony to the true definition of love versus shallow, glitzi, lusting 'love', that is so transient and can hurt many easily.Worth working at it in all the ups and downs! Rhiannon

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Posted in Loving You

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Thank you for highlighting

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019

Thank you for highlighting this. I had to google the lyrics as I find it difficult to pick up all the words just listening!

Though some might just 'find religion' or think it will forward their release to say so and maybe just pretend and...

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Posted in Zach Williams Live From Harding Prison Chain Breaker And No Longer Slaves.

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Sad memory? You've touched on

Posted on Tue, 28 May 2019

Sad memory? You've touched on this subject before I think, autobiographically. Sensitive to a child's anguish. Rhiannon

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Posted in Catharsis

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I rather like Jenny's

Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019

I rather like Jenny's offering!

In the old people's home I visit, it seems to need someone else to stir memory sharing, and they seem to organise that quite lot. In my visits I have to write down to stir Mum-in-law's memories and they do...

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Posted in Older Men Talking

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