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Physically frail and fading, failing; still strong in spirit, character, more content nowadays, Not sleeping today! Caring Home beautiful cake preparing – with firework! …
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Cherry

That all-important molecule!

Clustering in clouds that shade, then through the air conveyed as welcome showers their droplets raining drenching, draining –‘life-blood’ of the...
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Jesus saw, He called; He sees, He calls

Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Matthew* sitting at his stall – Jesus saw him in the crowd. Short Zacchaeus** heard his call – seen by Jesus up a tree. Sees with …
Cherry

Discovered old postcards

My sister found a pile of postcards – some to me, some unposted by me, over sixty years old. Many memories, some mysterious (who was that friend?) … - birthday greeting from over 60 years ago…
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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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It sounds as if you were

Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2025

It sounds as if you were protected from many evils around. At that age it is easy not to realise the dangers and the unkind and dangerous people that there sadly are around. Rhiannon

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Posted in All's Well That Ends Well

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I found it and removed the

Posted on Tue, 30 Sep 2025

I found it and removed the photo of parts of Pooh and Paddington book covers. Rh

https://www.abctales.com/story/rhiannonw/bears-discuss

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Posted in “If you find honey eat just enough –

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The last two lines are the

Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2025

The last two lines are the illusion promulgated for 'freedom' from responsibility, but leading to disillusionment and depression. There is purpose, there is usefulness, there is satisfaction, though always frustration  and weariness in the...

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Posted in RIP Real World

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It sometimes seems easier to

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2025

It sometimes seems easier to find out about things happening far away than near!

Quite a few years ago, a factory very close caught fire, and there was danger of explosion from the contents I think. We were sleepily hearing some noises and...

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Posted in Scary Event

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Intriguing twist again!

Posted on Sat, 20 Sep 2025

Intriguing twist again! Rhiannon

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Posted in How your heart pounds inside me

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I'm impressed by your giving

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025

I'm impressed by your giving note to nature detail naturally as you go along. Also to thought about their age and feelings, in a gentle way, not forcing caricatures. Rhiannon

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)

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A lovely story about the boy

Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025

A lovely story about the boy and 'you' and the cube. 

So sadly that the present chaos threatens to push people, frightened, into fear of all newcomers, and also the genuine who wish to be 'anglophiles' and make friends seem to be lost in...

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Posted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

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I can empathise with the

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

I can empathise with the enjoyment and appreciation of such memories and the detail of the experience coming back freshly. Also the appreciation of the parental support. Rhiannon

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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Oh, I'm not judging his

Posted on Tue, 09 Sep 2025

Oh, I'm not judging his sincerity, Nolan. I'm just expressing that we see a slogan, and it may be being worn for purpose and with sincerity, or it may be just a T-shirt he's wearing with little thought to the words on it. If we have conversation...

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Posted in “The T-shirt says it all”

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