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Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
You do seem to be able to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Read full commentThen suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...
Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four
Welcome, you are new here,
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of 'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'
Personally I would have liked a...
Read full commentPosted in The Embrace
This reminded me of when my
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...
Read full commentPosted in The Discovered Unartist
Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
Read full commentPosted in No Ties (IP)
thank you, Di. I suppose it
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2026
thank you, Di. I suppose it is a remimder of caution that we never know all the facts, even of events near at hand, we don't see the hearts of people, and are not present everywhere, so not to be quick to condemn, or refusing to aaccept...
Read full commentPosted in Imagine …
rhapsody, tintinnabulation
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2026
rhapsody, tintinnabulation (that is such a lovely word!), fire and ice — all create a feeling of the delight of the scene. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Rhapsody in G Minor
Interesting! and soothing of
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2026
Interesting! and soothing of relaxation in quiet countryside, warmth and dreams around a long-living tree! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Arboreal Secrets
Thank you, - no, it seems
Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2026
Thank you, - no, it seems different species of wasp make different galls, different 'hosts'. I had to look it up! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Robin's Pincushion again
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