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Long awaited
Flashes in the night, faintly light the bedroom … rumble … how far? again …awhile … again … when will we here hear rain? Suddenly the sound of water...
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Seven Dead
All deaths are sad. Hero policemen can no longer serve their families, the wider community. Lads drawn into crime and folly – no opportunity to turn...
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Looking up
The sky is a canvas, cloud scenes float by …
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A young man raised from the dead
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] From out the city came a crowd – with tears, they carry death. They met another crowd, and he who could...
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107!!
She sleeps a lot … not unhappy as in younger years … when …
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I like the title! There are
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
I like the title! There are always those unasked questions! And simple tasks and smells bring back memories and persons so keenly. In Welsh we would say that my grandmoher used 'the notion of the eye not the hand' I think, in measuring her flour...
Read full commentPosted in Toss in a pinch of love
I like this very much, too. I
Posted on Wed, 20 Jun 2018
I like this very much, too. I remember the word 'phototropism' from biology experiments on plants growing towards the light, but hadn't though of 'heliotropism' indicating turning towards the sun. And so I hadn't realised that is where the name...
Read full commentPosted in Heliotropism
Very credible situation with
Posted on Wed, 14 Mar 2018
Very credible situation with his Dad. Interesting how it comes out here the real concern his mother does have for him, and his awareness of that, though their communication together is difficult. In some ways his special phobias/worries seem to...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
Thought-provoking, Jean, and
Posted on Fri, 12 Feb 2016
Thought-provoking, Jean, and I can empathize with much that is on your mind. As a family, when I was growing up we didn't kiss, hug, or say 'I love you' much, but I think we were at ease with each other and had a warmth of expression in greeting...
Read full commentPosted in I Hate the Word Love
You do seem to be able to
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
You do seem to be able to describe his thinking very naturally, and his observations, looking into the water, noticing the small life, and drifting into imaginations.
Read full commentThen suddenly the tensions, mirrored a bit by his grandad's tensions. It...
Posted in Jake Mutant - Chapter Four
Welcome, you are new here,
Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015
Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of 'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'
Personally I would have liked a...
Read full commentPosted in The Embrace
This reminded me of when my
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...
Read full commentPosted in The Discovered Unartist
Stephen, I don't manage to
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...
Read full commentPosted in Shadow Cooking
Thanks, I appreciate your
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014
Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...
Read full commentPosted in No Ties (IP)
Thank you, Di. Yes! A bit
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2026
Thank you, Di. Yes! A bit cheeky for a 24 year-old courting?! Good relationship, they can have fun and tease!
My sister, who worked in Yorkshire awhile once, just told me when I sent her this, that she hadn't realised he had spent time in...
Read full commentPosted in The relief of the moors!
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