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I have 1774 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2351174 times and 493 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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She’s failing now, much more gaunt, but still some communication and happy – happier than years ago, most of her life – but waiting. We think she’d like a present – but what? …
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Wait! Go! Tell!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] What a task for group so weak: God will send them out to speak. Hostile world has not yet heard news they...
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Drizzle

… muslin mizzle …
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Cow — and Bull

A cow is big with doleful eyes, munching, chewing … The bull is bigger, burly …
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Where there is love and trust

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Unity and love – what blessing: precious, fragrant, spreading far, pure joy, and those possessing through...

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1221 of my comments have received 1257 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely photo! and the words

Posted on Sat, 23 Sep 2023

Lovely photo! and the words go with it. There are some dreary days, but a lot of sparkling colour, fresher air, and crunching leaves. Also blackberry picking here anyway, but more or less over now! Rhiannon

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Posted in "As The Leaves Turn..."

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People often seem to say that

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

People often seem to say that children enjoy a horror story. It might be so, but only really if they do know what to do with real panics and worries, and that there is a God in control and they can trust him. And therefore get a perspective on...

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Posted in Tempestuous Stirrings

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The last line says a lot.

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

The last line says a lot. Maybe best somewhere quite different! Rhiannon

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Posted in With Strange Feathers

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Thank you, Jenny. My husband

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

Thank you, Jenny. My husband has a real dislike to stcky feeling on things, so it's a point of fun with us to realise kids' enjoyment of it! Rhiannon

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Posted in Toddler Tea!

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Thank you, this is a totally

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

Thank you, this is a totally new one though. It is looking like rain here now too! Rhiannon

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Posted in Heatwave

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Very perceptive. When I was

Posted on Wed, 06 Sep 2023

Very perceptive. When I was young, I remember saying to my sister, that well, if it wasn't really fairies bringing money with the teeth (which I'd been told, presumably), then maybe Mum and Dad were 'Father Christmas'. She said, Yes, and I felt...

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Posted in The lies we tell our children

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Lovely! You draw the scene

Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023

Lovely! You draw the scene alive with its movement and smells. Rhiannon

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Posted in Another World

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You have used quite a few

Posted on Mon, 04 Sep 2023

You have used quite a few onomatopaeic words Jenny. I particularly liked 

collapses, lands with forceful thump; which being the end of the little section gives the real feeling of the shock and collapse! Rhiannon

 

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Posted in Stirring Forest

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I like the child's viewo of

Posted on Fri, 01 Sep 2023

I like the child's viewo of pioneering exploring through the tall weed 'jungle'. Was it up for the birds? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Curse of the Thing in the Jungle

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That sounds a bit complicated

Posted on Wed, 30 Aug 2023

That sounds a bit complicated too! But I guess what you mean is that a real Latin phrase might not really convey much to us from that past, or what it conveys will be always very limited, but all will appreciate a rest with that view to look at!...

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Posted in A riddle?

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