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I have 2104 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5047038 times and 656 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1538 of my 13,399 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1586 votes

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Perfect Home

… All bitterness, malice has gone, a glorious place is this home. There’s plenty to do, but no pain …
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What came first?

‘Who made me?’ said the apple to the tree.' …
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Cherry

Perspective

Fusion fireball rises, though it is we …

Difficulties in Life

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The furnace hot refines, and hard the cleansing heat: no cross or tribulation borne but will bring benefit...
Cherry

Who am I?

My first is in ‘ timid’, but that I’m not …

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1538 of my comments have received 1586 Great Feedback votes

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I'm impressed by your giving

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025

I'm impressed by your giving note to nature detail naturally as you go along. Also to thought about their age and feelings, in a gentle way, not forcing caricatures. Rhiannon

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)

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A lovely story about the boy

Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025

A lovely story about the boy and 'you' and the cube. 

So sadly that the present chaos threatens to push people, frightened, into fear of all newcomers, and also the genuine who wish to be 'anglophiles' and make friends seem to be lost in...

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Posted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube

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I can empathise with the

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

I can empathise with the enjoyment and appreciation of such memories and the detail of the experience coming back freshly. Also the appreciation of the parental support. Rhiannon

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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Oh, I'm not judging his

Posted on Tue, 09 Sep 2025

Oh, I'm not judging his sincerity, Nolan. I'm just expressing that we see a slogan, and it may be being worn for purpose and with sincerity, or it may be just a T-shirt he's wearing with little thought to the words on it. If we have conversation...

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Posted in “The T-shirt says it all”

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Wonderful photos in the link.

Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2025

Wonderful photos in the link. I didn't realise that Western Australia was known for its prolific wildflowers. Your writing shows the joy sparkling at the vivid sights! Rhiannon

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Posted in Yellow Days

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Quite an experience flying

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Quite an experience flying through such downpours and out again! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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I hadn't got what you were

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I hadn't got what you were handling in this one on first reading it, but the comments discussion show me! We enjoy managing to get our feelings on to paper, but sometimes the subject matter of our thoughts is a bit unlcear, and it is nice when a...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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She seems to have an

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

She seems to have an obsession or phobia about trouble, doesn't she? Like someone 'enjoying ill health'.  One wants to tell her to pray! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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Been a bit slow picking up

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

Been a bit slow picking up this one! Quite an idea to have the treasure hunt idea and the manhunt going for them! Must be a lot of detail to work out to keep all clear and not rambling. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 4

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You describe the sensation of

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

You describe the sensation of fog walking well. I don't think I've been out walking in real fog for many years! Is the Napoleonic fort you mention the same as the Brean fort he is at?

One thing: From this point, the nearest island...

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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