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Thanks. Maybe they had it
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024
Thanks. Maybe they had it coming, but we mustn't shut them off from the possiblitiy of repentance and reformation. Being found out is sometimes a blessing, as our children come to realise!
The reference to the parable of the Pharisee and...
Read full commentPosted in Not just the specks in their eyes*
Thanks. No, I didn't put/have
Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024
Thanks. No, I didn't put/have a rhyme for dialogue. Treated it as a longer line! I don't put in rhymes for the sake of it, but if they fit and enhance the meaning and are failrly unobtrusive they do aid the flow and impact and readability!...
Read full commentPosted in In the summer heat
the skilled artistry of
Posted on Sun, 04 Aug 2024
the skilled artistry of writers with their nimble fingers,
That phrase amused and intrigued me a little: I thought, isn't it the nimble mind that is sorting out what to write, but then I realised the thoughts must be caught by the...
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Thank you, Jenny.
Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024
Thank you, Jenny.
There is so much wielding of knives, sometimes meant for 'enemies' though even then sometimes others getting hurt or killed.
There is a generation that has been robbed of training and foundations by example and...
Read full commentPosted in Hold fast To Love
Lovely to have noticing eyes
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
Lovely to have noticing eyes and mind to see beauty and the interest of variations in everything around all the time. Do you use your observations in artwork as well as writing and enjoyment of thought? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Here I Am. By MarciaMarcia
I'm sorry to hear you are
Posted on Wed, 24 Jul 2024
I'm sorry to hear you are experiecing such pain and illness, Jenny. That video is a lovely collection of images. Visiting such places that I have never been to and never will! It is good that we have such available now, and of course memories to...
Read full commentPosted in Suspended Between Two Worlds
Incidentally imparting
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
Incidentally imparting information about Iceland during WW2! Presumably Eric wasn't badly hurt?
How lovely to have been able to stroll around a crater in the Aeolian islands. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Eric’s War
You draw the scene, and draw
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
You draw the scene, and draw the reader into it, with memories of the like, where we muse about the unknowns around us briefly. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Rain at the Forest Cafe
It made me ponder on the
Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024
It made me ponder on the people who we know so little about that we see and pass, and may wonder about, but only see the outer features, and maybe a little of the wear and tear of life on their faces. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Broken Lady
I didn't realise you'd just
Posted on Thu, 11 Jul 2024
I didn't realise you'd just had your birthday, Jenny. I'm 5 years ahead it seems!
"Here we have no abiding city" certainly, And we can have a Father's guiding hand and a fixed and steady purpose and pace, trust and patience in the troubles...
Read full commentPosted in Holding Onto My Desires And Dreams
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