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I have 2149 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5467292 times and 674 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1542 of my 13,338 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1588 votes

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Whatever the British weather …

Whether the weather is hot, or whether the weather be cold, whether the weather suit me or whether it’s not what I want: whatever the weather we’ll...
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Free Offer: “Come, all you who are thirsty …*

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Deepest turmoils of the soul stilled for those who drink, abide with their Maker – hear His call – ‘thirst’...
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Dark and dreary …

… soggy, foggy winter days – a weary phase: hurry, scurry no pausing, gazing at squelchy decay; briskly wend our way to cosy nest – warmth, light and...
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Announcement!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Hark! the herald angels sing – with astonishment they bring news stupendous to the earth – thus announce th’...

Sss…!!

The sneaky snake streaked …
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1542 of my comments have received 1588 Great Feedback votes

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I can empathise with the

Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025

I can empathise with the enjoyment and appreciation of such memories and the detail of the experience coming back freshly. Also the appreciation of the parental support. Rhiannon

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Posted in Letter Going Beyond The Grave

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Oh, I'm not judging his

Posted on Tue, 09 Sep 2025

Oh, I'm not judging his sincerity, Nolan. I'm just expressing that we see a slogan, and it may be being worn for purpose and with sincerity, or it may be just a T-shirt he's wearing with little thought to the words on it. If we have conversation...

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Posted in “The T-shirt says it all”

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Wonderful photos in the link.

Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2025

Wonderful photos in the link. I didn't realise that Western Australia was known for its prolific wildflowers. Your writing shows the joy sparkling at the vivid sights! Rhiannon

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Posted in Yellow Days

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Quite an experience flying

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Quite an experience flying through such downpours and out again! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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I hadn't got what you were

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I hadn't got what you were handling in this one on first reading it, but the comments discussion show me! We enjoy managing to get our feelings on to paper, but sometimes the subject matter of our thoughts is a bit unlcear, and it is nice when a...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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She seems to have an

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

She seems to have an obsession or phobia about trouble, doesn't she? Like someone 'enjoying ill health'.  One wants to tell her to pray! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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Been a bit slow picking up

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

Been a bit slow picking up this one! Quite an idea to have the treasure hunt idea and the manhunt going for them! Must be a lot of detail to work out to keep all clear and not rambling. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 4

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You describe the sensation of

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

You describe the sensation of fog walking well. I don't think I've been out walking in real fog for many years! Is the Napoleonic fort you mention the same as the Brean fort he is at?

One thing: From this point, the nearest island...

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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I enjoyed the dreaminess of

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

I enjoyed the dreaminess of looking at the sky above, and imagining swimming in its beauty, on a warm day, relaxing.

Took a bit longer to think of the rest of your dreaminess. I imagine the relaxation of the lovely day, the silence and...

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Posted in Fragments Of Life

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Quite apart from where your

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

Quite apart from where your bigger story is going, this is an interesting exploration of how boys, maybe having been bulllied, venturing in, egging each other on, into flexing their bullying muscles, and how easily it can escalate to their harm...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

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