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I have 2059 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4492175 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

Above, in 10 minutes!

Walk five minutes past the houses, over the road and past the mown hayfield, up the hill, past the view of Titterstone Clee hill northwards of the...
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Jesus Christ divides!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Some accept, in Him delight, some reject His truth, His light, some fall – down, away, or back, unaware of...

Life on the ledge

Seabird lays eggs on a ledge … one … rolls over the edge … or safe on his ledge til fully fledged?
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Cherry

Crafted and Mastered

Lovingly made to sing, skilfully played … emotions soar, and smile awhile …
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Shark-skin swimsuits

Biomimetics (5) Shark skin found to be so unusual … swimsuits that copied … records were broken … airlines are coating many planes … saving fuel.
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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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Wonderful photos in the link.

Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2025

Wonderful photos in the link. I didn't realise that Western Australia was known for its prolific wildflowers. Your writing shows the joy sparkling at the vivid sights! Rhiannon

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Posted in Yellow Days

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Quite an experience flying

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

Quite an experience flying through such downpours and out again! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Moment To Ponder

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I hadn't got what you were

Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025

I hadn't got what you were handling in this one on first reading it, but the comments discussion show me! We enjoy managing to get our feelings on to paper, but sometimes the subject matter of our thoughts is a bit unlcear, and it is nice when a...

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Posted in When All Seems Lost

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She seems to have an

Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025

She seems to have an obsession or phobia about trouble, doesn't she? Like someone 'enjoying ill health'.  One wants to tell her to pray! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 5

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Been a bit slow picking up

Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025

Been a bit slow picking up this one! Quite an idea to have the treasure hunt idea and the manhunt going for them! Must be a lot of detail to work out to keep all clear and not rambling. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Art of Trouble" 4

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You describe the sensation of

Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025

You describe the sensation of fog walking well. I don't think I've been out walking in real fog for many years! Is the Napoleonic fort you mention the same as the Brean fort he is at?

One thing: From this point, the nearest island...

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Posted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)

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I enjoyed the dreaminess of

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025

I enjoyed the dreaminess of looking at the sky above, and imagining swimming in its beauty, on a warm day, relaxing.

Took a bit longer to think of the rest of your dreaminess. I imagine the relaxation of the lovely day, the silence and...

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Posted in Fragments Of Life

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Quite apart from where your

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

Quite apart from where your bigger story is going, this is an interesting exploration of how boys, maybe having been bulllied, venturing in, egging each other on, into flexing their bullying muscles, and how easily it can escalate to their harm...

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)

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So difficult to describe

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025

So difficult to describe those swirling hues! draped and languorous seem good adjectives.

Seems odd to connect them to watching angels servants, but I see the imagery can be thought of that way, Rhiannon

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Posted in Borealis

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She certainly seemed to have

Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025

She certainly seemed to have been very pleased to meet you. My first contact here on the site with her was when one of my very early pieces I posted was 'Seashore' for kids, and she made a nice comment! Rhiannon

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Posted in Our Old Girl… Remembering Coral

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