Rhiannonw
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Wonderful photos in the link.
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2025
Wonderful photos in the link. I didn't realise that Western Australia was known for its prolific wildflowers. Your writing shows the joy sparkling at the vivid sights! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Yellow Days
Quite an experience flying
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025
Quite an experience flying through such downpours and out again! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in A Moment To Ponder
I hadn't got what you were
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
I hadn't got what you were handling in this one on first reading it, but the comments discussion show me! We enjoy managing to get our feelings on to paper, but sometimes the subject matter of our thoughts is a bit unlcear, and it is nice when a...
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
She seems to have an
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
She seems to have an obsession or phobia about trouble, doesn't she? Like someone 'enjoying ill health'. One wants to tell her to pray! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 5
Been a bit slow picking up
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2025
Been a bit slow picking up this one! Quite an idea to have the treasure hunt idea and the manhunt going for them! Must be a lot of detail to work out to keep all clear and not rambling. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Art of Trouble" 4
You describe the sensation of
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
You describe the sensation of fog walking well. I don't think I've been out walking in real fog for many years! Is the Napoleonic fort you mention the same as the Brean fort he is at?
One thing: From this point, the nearest island...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy - The Immortal Witch (6)
I enjoyed the dreaminess of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
I enjoyed the dreaminess of looking at the sky above, and imagining swimming in its beauty, on a warm day, relaxing.
Took a bit longer to think of the rest of your dreaminess. I imagine the relaxation of the lovely day, the silence and...
Read full commentPosted in Fragments Of Life
Quite apart from where your
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
Quite apart from where your bigger story is going, this is an interesting exploration of how boys, maybe having been bulllied, venturing in, egging each other on, into flexing their bullying muscles, and how easily it can escalate to their harm...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (5)
So difficult to describe
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2025
So difficult to describe those swirling hues! draped and languorous seem good adjectives.
Seems odd to connect them to watching angels servants, but I see the imagery can be thought of that way, Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Borealis
She certainly seemed to have
Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2025
She certainly seemed to have been very pleased to meet you. My first contact here on the site with her was when one of my very early pieces I posted was 'Seashore' for kids, and she made a nice comment! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Our Old Girl… Remembering Coral
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