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I have 1576 stories published in 15 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1833926 times and 403 of my stories have been cherry picked.
893 of my 10,283 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 925 votes

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Cherry

Mid-Wales Haiku?

Soft green lumps of hills …
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Cherry

Ouch!

Don’t touch! It’s hot! … Ouch! …
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‘Beautiful Feet!’

Offline for 2 Sundays, so here is one 'Sunday Song' ahead …
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Unfair (?)

“If I were in her shoes how good I would be. If I had his money I’d give generously presents, all lavish … and look after me, of course! … just so I...

Who loves God’s presence?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] When gone astray, the Christian yearns to feel again God’s care – though tough the way, with him close by, fullness of joy is there. … But those who do not want his rule …

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893 of my comments have received 925 Great Feedback votes

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Welcome, you are new here,

Posted on Thu, 27 Aug 2015

Welcome, you are new here, aren't you? You've drawn out an interesting and tender theme here.
I liked the thoughtfulness of  'As the passion that they share Crescendos with great care.'

Personally I would have liked a...

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Posted in The Embrace

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This reminded me of when my

Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015

This reminded me of when my son was being taught about the 'rules of composition' for music, and I worried he would lose what seemed to be spontaneous and individual intuition for what would make interesting sound. He assured me it wouldn't, but...

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Posted in The Discovered Unartist

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Trying to see where you're

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

Trying to see where you're coming from in this, PT. It's because of the suffering, death, sin, that God is doing something. I know we would like him to sort it all out at ths moment,  but just like the prophecies concerning his first...

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Posted in Broken Faith

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Stephen, I don't manage to

Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014

Stephen, I don't manage to dip much into the prose section, and horror and surreal isn't really my scene – I didn't even like 'Alice in Wonderland' as a child! However I did find reading this intriguing for the well-structured brevity, and the...

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Posted in Shadow Cooking

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Thanks, I appreciate your

Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2014

Thanks, I appreciate your interest at analysis, Stephen. My background is Welsh and Welsh poetry which makes a lot of use of repetition of consonants or part words to form unbotrusive patterns to help the impact of verse. (In its technical...

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Posted in No Ties (IP)

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I've been thinking to wait

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

I've been thinking to wait for part 2 before commenting! But maybe offline or not on much for a week or so, so just to say that I found your description of the underground very good (visual, aural, olfactory?!) A plunge into sexual relationship...

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Posted in Charmed (Part One of Two)

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You bring the drowsy days to

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

You bring the drowsy days to sight, and the waves and sand and sunshine. And then the down-to-earth bump at the end, when even in those days, the money suddenly is running out! And daily life and work probably had to be picked up after the...

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Posted in Along Cornish Coast

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Hi, Di. I take it this is of

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

Hi, Di. I take it this is of somewhere near you? My first thought was what a lovely place to be able to visit. So well described.Then, yes, so sad to see it snarled up, – but those scraped roots and broken grasses will recover and quickly. Not so...

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Posted in logging evidence of us

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Thank you, Catherine. Yes,

Posted on Thu, 04 Aug 2022

Thank you, Catherine. Yes, the simple vatiations in the countryside we walk through are so worth noticing. I have always enjoyed the terrain and views to be 3-dimentional since childhood, to give so much more interest. 'What's around the next...

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Posted in Near Titley

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Good to read your writing

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

Good to read your writing full of good humour again, Jean, and that you are still able to enjoy life, and have your daughter(s)' company. Also good that some of the Palsy problem has stopped, maybe these things can quietly improve when you aren't...

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Posted in chemo 4

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