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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2536432 times and 535 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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True, humble prayer, and a proud pretender

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] On the story of the Pharisee and the Tax Collector told in Luke 18:9-14 It was not that he’d good to claim or vowed to make fresh start …
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Westope Wood Hill

(30/7/21) Steep up the hill ’til reach the woody crown, and see so far; stop and stare, let your eyes take their fill; stroll round the wood to the...
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Caution!

Sly and wily, slick and slippery, shrewd and shifty, slinky, stealthy, snaky, sneaky, cunning, canny, conniving, contriving, artful, astute,...
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God is, and is love

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A God at the heart of the universe, a love that is willing to serve us and bless. In person he came – not to...
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False Hope

Risking much for gain or loss on a superstitious toss; ‘Good’ luck fostering compulsion to a frequent repetition thus a strangling addiction slide to...
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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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So sad that there should be

Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020

So sad that there should be such hatred for Christ. Pray that such a death would actually prompt some to seek the God he served and who upheld him, and upholds those who remain. Rhiannon

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Posted in Do You Know Who I Am?

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What wonderful truth, and

Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020

What wonderful truth, and love, and so tragic that so many don't think about it, reject without thought, pray that many eyes and minds will be cleared to 'see' and receive! Rhiannon

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Posted in Do You Know Who I Am? Part Two.

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The in-laws had always been a

Posted on Thu, 16 Jan 2020

The in-laws had always been a bit verbally and emotionally volatile with each other,and not explaining their feelings to each other. Then with his confusion. we could understand what he was trying to say better than she, especially as her hearing...

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Posted in Respite

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I hope that does mean a

Posted on Thu, 16 Jan 2020

I hope that does mean a proper respite care provision. We experienced that when caring for my father-in-law (dementia, and rather a difficult person anyway) and mother-in-law — he in official respite provision every couple of months (aprox) and...

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Posted in Respite

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So sorry. It's all still very

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2020

So sorry. It's all still very raw. And the knee and shoulder, too.

No cliché way out, but looking for something small you enjoy now may be a start. And you know I'd say one does understand and you can be privately honest with him. Rhiannon

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Posted in The policeman sat in the armchair

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You always have a musical

Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2020

You always have a musical flow of words, Nolan, though very concentrated, personal, and enigmatic in the sense that there seems to be much background thinking linking it all. The Bible verse seems to give the key here of the mixture of patience...

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Posted in faithful to the dream

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Rhyme gets a bad press

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

Rhyme gets a bad press because of forced rhymes and poor rhythm that can really be doggerel. For those of us who use rhymeing quite a lot we know it can not only be satisfying, but helpful when used to help the rhythm and the impact. Similarly,...

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Posted in A Dog's Dinner

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Good to share your

Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2020

Good to share your investigations, Luigi! and the point made here somehow of the different approach to rhythm, and having to decide on how long is best for the content you have. The idea of the coda to 'round off' is interesting too. I wonder how...

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Posted in A Chōka Poem

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Interesting last verse

Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020

Interesting last verse thought of unwrapping suprising ideas in your mind, and the excitment of developing them creatively, and that that is possible despite shortcomings and aging! Rhiannon

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Posted in Woman In The Mirror

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It's hard to be

Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019

It's hard to be misunderstood and misjudged, isn't it? Praying to accept criticism that is right and grace to benefit from it, and respond graciously when criticism seems wrong and mistaken but not possible to persuade! Rhiannon

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Posted in Dear Jesus

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