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I have 2043 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4327173 times and 631 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1494 of my 13,091 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1537 votes

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What goes in will emerge

For out of the heart flowing into the mouth come words that are healing, or spiteful, untruth, and actions and will prompted kindly to live … Through Eye-gate and Ear-gate my heart will be fed … God’s Holy Spirit comes there to indwell …

Don’t say ‘cheese’!

Is it made from green cheese, that friendly moon up there? or did it from a young earth squeeze, or join us from elsewhere? The moon probes told us ‘...
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Silver Path on the Green, Green Grass

… sunlight catching fine wispy cobweb carpet, glistening, shaking, shimmering in the breeze.
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Make us more useful to the world

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] God be merciful and bless us, shine upon us – warmth and light: wake us, guide us, sanctify thus so those...

Soothing green, or making you green with …

Soothing to the eyes is the green of the springtime scene; but feeling green at …
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1494 of my comments have received 1537 Great Feedback votes

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You have so much maple over

Posted on Fri, 08 Oct 2021

You have so much maple over there I think! Also I think you are a  bit ahead of us in the autumn coldness and colouring. We do have a little bush called Stag's Horn in the garden that is in beautiful colours of red, orange and yellow, jut outside...

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Posted in October

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I sometimes wonder if those

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

I sometimes wonder if those praising some pieces really understand them (I am aware of being very slow to understand even Shakespear myself, without a teacher leading my thoughts), or merely like some parts, and like the sound flow of the words...

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Posted in Choice

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A touching memory, Graham,

Posted on Thu, 07 Oct 2021

A touching memory, Graham, especially as your 'masquerade' could have been sore for the listener in his hard circumstances, and provoked feelings of jealousy, but in fact, his gentle interest in your 'success' and happiness, cheered you! Rhiannon

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Posted in Excuse Me Was That An Angel?

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This is beautiful, Di! and

Posted on Wed, 06 Oct 2021

This is beautiful, Di! and the simple unobtrusive rhythm and rhyme making a simple flow of the words! Rhiannon

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Posted in October robin

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Glimpses we have of people

Posted on Wed, 06 Oct 2021

Glimpses we have of people and situations in the past can be quite tantalizing in feeling we know only the surface of events and would love to be able to time-travel to see more, and ask questions and try to understand the why of people's...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 7

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'Ships passing in the night'

Posted on Tue, 05 Oct 2021

'Ships passing in the night' … I read this before, and like Jean, was taken with the description of the setting, but thought to have another look when some had commented!

How little we do see through the windows of the eyes in those...

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Posted in Strangers on a Street

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Lovely you had those

Posted on Mon, 04 Oct 2021

Lovely you had those experiences, Richard, to remember and be able to recall and describe in such detail to delight others. And, still the calls of friendship to give though you can't move far now. Rhiannon

 

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Posted in Continuous And In Motion

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Very interesting, Jenny!

Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021

Very interesting, Jenny! Rhiannon

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Posted in Stone Loach

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It all seems to be very

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

It all seems to be very confused!

An era when some travelled a lot, but most didn't travel at all?

The children do seem to have been looked after with care and love, and had experienced real love from their parents at the early age...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 6

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There's no need to apologise,

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

There's no need to apologise, Ed! Wonderful all that the little creatures accomplish, - I was highlighting the particularly specialised net-spinning ones, but I pointed out they all are doing intriguing things, and are of benefit in the river...

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Posted in I, Caddis

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