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The Christmas Mansion Mystery ( Part Three )

By skinner_jennifer on Thu, 24 Nov 2011

The Shock!

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The Christmas Mansion Mystery ( Part Two )

By skinner_jennifer on Wed, 23 Nov 2011

Later that morning.

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The Christmas Mansion Mystery ( Part One )

By skinner_jennifer on Tue, 22 Nov 2011

This is a Who Done it! just writing for fun.

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What an amazing sight to see

Posted on Fri, 25 Oct 2019

What an amazing sight to see all those apples piled high and getting used. I like how you descibe what you are seeing, in this poem.

We have crows and magpies that simply love to sit in the neighbour's apple tree and peck away at the fruit...

Posted in Harvest!

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A disturbing story that

Posted on Wed, 23 Oct 2019

A disturbing story that leaves the reader wondering as to whether Robin is found guilty or not.

Some great descriptions which gave the story atmosphere and you had me absorbed from beginning to end.

Jenny.

Posted in Judith Wilkinson

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Oh dear Jean,

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

Oh dear Jean,

what a crazy mix up. It must have been devastating for him as much as it was for you. Isn't it strange how we can misunderstand situations? I wonder how different things would have been had you stuck around and spoken to him...

Posted in Al in Minneapolis

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Oh Jean,

Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019

Oh Jean,

the passion you felt for Al shines through in this part. It's not just the fact that you loved him, but that you were willing to give up every thing for him. When we're young we need our dreams and should take chances...well in my...

Posted in Al and the Wonderful Summer

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019

Hi Jean,

I was so absorbed in this part of your life. It reminded me of a time in my own life when love got the better of me. Love can be so cruel at times, yet wonderful at other times.

On to next part with anticipation.

...

Posted in Al and the Levecar

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If I were a young Jenny in

Posted on Tue, 15 Oct 2019

If I were a young Jenny in your story I'd be loving this adventure even with the dangers that are ahead.

I loved the way you had the snake talking and that other strange creature...a Tarsier, what a cool name.

Still very much...

Posted in "The Trouble with Magical Beings" (A Fantasy) Chapter 10

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This is such a moving poem

Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019

This is such a moving poem onemorething. I could imagine the whale's soul looking down on its body wittnessing those wires holding its skeleton together. To me it was as if the whale itself had written the poem and was describing a memory of its...

Posted in Whale bones

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Hi Jane, you echo the

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Jane, you echo the struggle some people have with their demons in this poem, that cry for help, feelings of isolation when life seems so pointless...yet I like how you describe the fact that no matter how far down in the pit life takes you,...

Posted in Strange Light

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Isn't it great looking back

Posted on Tue, 08 Oct 2019

Isn't it great looking back onemorething. Thinking of the excitement of having some pocket money to spend and going from one ride to another. All those fairground guys, who seemed to us young teenagers to be so clever as they took risks when...

Posted in Nostalgia At The Fair

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Hi Penny,

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

Hi Penny,

Wiltshire where I live is supposed to be a place for deer, yet I've only ever seen one from a distance once and I've been living here since 1987. I know what you mean about hunting them, which for me is a great shame too. ...