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Wonderful poem penny. I could
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
Wonderful poem penny. I could relate to so much in your words. It's wonderful to be able to explore our imaginations and dreams...where would we be without them? I also like the rhyming in your poem, it sets it off nicely.
I thought that last line summed up your apocalyptic poem, that even after we're long gone, nature will go on. A poem also describing how small humans actually are in the grand scheme of survival.
Your account of the heavens gives your poem so much mind blowing drama. I look up at the night sky and i'm lost for words at the vastness we cannot see with the human eye, but your poem brings it all closer.
Wonderful poem penny. I could
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
Wonderful poem penny. I could relate to so much in your words. It's wonderful to be able to explore our imaginations and dreams...where would we be without them? I also like the rhyming in your poem, it sets it off nicely.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Carpe Diem !
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Hello Di,
there's no way you are thick at all. This was just a bit of fantasy talk.
It means the prisoner escaped at night and crept into some bushes to sleep not really knowing where they are. When the prisoner awakes and creeps...
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
Some great rhythm and rhyme
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Some great rhythm and rhyme in each stanza of this poem Luigi.
It's amazing when there's a need to achieve great heights, the determination some humans will go to when faced with obstacles.
I always think of people with...
Read full commentPosted in Hurdles
Some wonderful descriptions
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Some wonderful descriptions of the wind in this poem Richard. Especially loved,
At times it may
provide
a soft caress
as when lovers meet.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Wind
I thought that last line
Posted on Fri, 12 Mar 2021
I thought that last line summed up your apocalyptic poem, that even after we're long gone, nature will go on. A poem also describing how small humans actually are in the grand scheme of survival.
Inspiring and made me think Hilary.
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Read full commentPosted in Pandora's Box
Hi Paul,
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
Hi Paul,
Your account of the heavens gives your poem so much mind blowing drama. I look up at the night sky and i'm lost for words at the vastness we cannot see with the human eye, but your poem brings it all closer.
Brilliant....
Read full commentPosted in Black Holes and Revelations
An enjoyabe read, that is
Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2021
An enjoyabe read, that is full of comedy and adventure.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in She Knows She At The End - Episode 24
Oh dear! Aefelthrith's not
Posted on Sun, 07 Mar 2021
Oh dear! Aefelthrith's not being very fair, poor Gwladys is left with no choice. I wonder what will happen next? Looking forward to finding out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Let Her In Constancy - Episode 23
You paint the story with
Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021
You paint the story with words so well. I can visualize the whole scene perfectly.
Still enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in She Will Make Good Her Right - Episode 21
Love the names of the baliffs
Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021
Love the names of the baliffs...Jarvis and Cocker, made me laugh with the familiar link to a certain singer....
Read full commentPosted in Can Daunt Her Spirit - Episode 20
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