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A Poem inspired by the wind and rain we had last night. Looking out the window watching the trees swaying I just could'nt help thinking about the birds.
A poem about a fictitious farmer who lives in good old Zummerzet, otherwise known as Somerset. with his wife and kids and animals. I know it does not always rhym, but hey!
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What a great story, I loved
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2014
What a great story, I loved hearing about the dwellers of Ochre-ridge. Some wonderful metaphors within the story too. This kind of reminded me of something that Dylan Thomas would write.
the words are those that I can relate to, when you love someone so deeply that they've been a part of your life for so long, it's hard to imagine them not there. Yes...this definitely bought a...
I never really had any ambitions as a small child, but can relate to the pudding basin hair cut. Though later on when I was sixteen I joined amateur dramatics. I was in a play...
If only we could bottle up moments in time and uncork them at our leasure, we could once more be with our mums when their health was fine and although not always perfect, at least we had shared moments...
What a great story, I loved
Posted on Sun, 17 Aug 2014
What a great story, I loved hearing about the dwellers of Ochre-ridge. Some wonderful metaphors within the story too. This kind of reminded me of something that Dylan Thomas would write.
Brilliant read and very much enjoyed.
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Read full commentPosted in Ochre Ridge
Hi there RADDman,
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014
Hi there RADDman,
I too thought this had a touch of Animal Farm to it. Had this picture in my mind of cows at a Union Meeting as I was reading...very funny! ...
Read full commentPosted in Before Chikin
You've captured so much love
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
You've captured so much love in your words. This was a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The start of something new
There's such saddness in this
Posted on Fri, 08 Aug 2014
There's such saddness in this poem Tina,
the words are those that I can relate to, when you love someone so deeply that they've been a part of your life for so long, it's hard to imagine them not there. Yes...this definitely bought a...
Read full commentPosted in Freefall
A poingnant poem written from
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2014
A poingnant poem written from the heart, that leaves the reader with much food for thought.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in How Should We Mark The Place They Fell?
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2014
Hi Tina,
I read this piece with great interest.
I never really had any ambitions as a small child, but can relate to the pudding basin hair cut. Though later on when I was sixteen I joined amateur dramatics. I was in a play...
Read full commentPosted in A Star is Born
Hi Tina,
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
Hi Tina,
great piece of writing here. I've never been to Battersea Power Station, but the album cover is amazing.
You brought back some wonderful memories of going to see Pink Floyd perform Animals at the Wembly Staduim. What a...
Read full commentPosted in If Pigs Could Fly
Still enjoying and looking
Posted on Tue, 08 Jul 2014
Still enjoying and looking forward to reading more.
Just wanted to mention a couple of mistakes I noticed.
Last paragraph you say:- taking a huge looking for something they had no idea existed or not.
Also:-
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Read full commentPosted in Into Darkness: Chapter 2, Section(s): 2
A touching piece of writing
Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2014
A touching piece of writing Tina.
If only we could bottle up moments in time and uncork them at our leasure, we could once more be with our mums when their health was fine and although not always perfect, at least we had shared moments...
Read full commentPosted in Life on Mars
Hi there Moya,
Posted on Wed, 04 Jun 2014
Hi there Moya,
my prediction is that you will finish this story, because it's good and look at the amount of readers you have, they all want you to finish, as do I.
Good luck with ideas ...
Read full commentPosted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Eight - 1162 words
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