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Dear diary...remembering a time in early 1970. Now I still feel the same inside. Once we danced in meadows it was a hippy special time, with sunshine...
This grief is fresh like the air that I breathe, upsetting my equilibrium; leaving me unbalanced, refusing to cease; why am I so sensitive, consumed...
it's getting really exciting with all the unanswered questions flying around. Now I'm wondering who is at the front door. Keep going Penny, loving the suspense.
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read your school life history. It seems you moved around a lot, it must have been unsettling, but I suppose you were used to it.
When my granddad was ill, we stayed with my gran for quite a few months...
I love how you're keeping the plot going Jane. It can go in so many directions. Cedric is a great new character too, that I'm sure will add to the story.
I have to say that our school could be wild too. I was in the lowest of the lowest classes all my school life, because I was a slow learner. Many of the boys ended up on the bad side of the law, because of their antics. ...
you know because I was always focused on avoiding being beaten up, and trying to manoeuvre my way from trouble, learning became almost impossible, even the subjects that I enjoyed like; English, art and history never got off the...
You've conjured so many vivid
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
You've conjured so many vivid memories Turlough. Was Foxwood an all boys school? Only no girls were mentioned.
The turmoil of cross country running sounded horrendous. I hated all sports at school. The teachers were proper dictaters, just...
Read full commentPosted in The Sogginess of the Long-Distance Runner
Spencer seems to be in better
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2025
Spencer seems to be in better control of the situation than Vanessa, even though he's been tampered with.
Can't wait to find out more about Cedric, he seems a bit eccentric, which makes the story more tense, not knowing how he might act...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 53
it's getting really exciting
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2025
it's getting really exciting with all the unanswered questions flying around. Now I'm wondering who is at the front door. Keep going Penny, loving the suspense.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'Willow's Missing Tail" 25
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read
Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2025
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read your school life history. It seems you moved around a lot, it must have been unsettling, but I suppose you were used to it.
When my granddad was ill, we stayed with my gran for quite a few months...
Read full commentPosted in Five schools
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
Hi Rhiannon,
you capture this February weather with your poem. Love the idea of:
Frosty clear,
blue, blue day - sky
Sparkling night:
warm clothing,
That gives me a hospitable feeling, with my love of the...
Read full commentPosted in February Variety
I love how you're keeping the
Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025
I love how you're keeping the plot going Jane. It can go in so many directions. Cedric is a great new character too, that I'm sure will add to the story.
Loving reading and look forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 52
After everything that's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2025
After everything that's happened, with all the twists and turns in your story Phil, it's been such a great pleasure to read.
I'm now wondering how Precious will react to what Jeannie has to say. After her reaction in the other part, I...
Read full commentPosted in Working My Way Back to You (Dead Reckoning series - Part 48)
This is brilliant Ed, just
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025
This is brilliant Ed, just love the idea of cars turning into weeping metal. So many great metaphors making up this poem.
Loving it.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Snow
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025
Hi Turlough,
I have to say that our school could be wild too. I was in the lowest of the lowest classes all my school life, because I was a slow learner. Many of the boys ended up on the bad side of the law, because of their antics. ...
Read full commentPosted in School Reunion
Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2025
Hello Di,
you know because I was always focused on avoiding being beaten up, and trying to manoeuvre my way from trouble, learning became almost impossible, even the subjects that I enjoyed like; English, art and history never got off the...
Read full commentPosted in School Reunion
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