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I have 21 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 16973 times and 20 of my stories have been cherry picked.
18 of my 380 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 19 votes

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'...little tales of love, loss and regrets...'

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District Line ( London competition)

doors closing… dead eyed they hang from leather loops ears plastic wrapped to numbing music cloth wrapped meat destined for abattoirs of chrome and...
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Touring with Harry ( London Competition)

Harry just loves the city of London. Most days and nights he can be found driving his open topper past all the world famous landmarks that London has...

Blue tarpaulin

As Mike awaits the return telephone call he swivels and tilts his chair back to study the gathering storm clouds through a dirt smeared window.....
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Jingle Bells...Jingle Bells...!! ( IP)

‘…better now or never Rudo…bring them all in and let’s get on with it…! Hi guys bad news I’m afraid, there’s no easy way to say this but…! As from...
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so OS in love

‘Is it possible to increase the size please? ‘ I can! Let’s try A1 and see how that comes out, then go from there! Will that be OK? I nod a yes and...

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18 of my comments have received 19 Great Feedback votes

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Hello sand lady.

Posted on Wed, 10 Dec 2014

Hello sand lady.

A late dip into your tales (login probs) and what a delight to read this knitted yarn.

A proper jumper I say whatever the label tells you

Regards

ps  When are you to be seen wearing  the  Christina...

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Posted in Always Read the Label

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First time for me in reading

Posted on Mon, 18 Jan 2016

First time for me in reading your tales AE.  I did learn the meaning of "...sentience..."

ps  Can I suggest you condense ( only a suggestion)the text with less line breaks.  For me it makes for easier  read 

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Posted in A Priori

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swarming stars and "...to be

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2016

swarming stars and "...to be with my daughter one of these tumbling days..." 

a lovely memory to cherish.

best wishes sandlady

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Posted in Beginners, Please...

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Lots and lots I liked in this

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015

Lots and lots I liked in this one sand lady.

Plus two new words for me "...ambergris..."  and  "...Sara-Orange-Tip..."

And I have been privileged to witness  "...a murmuration of a million starlings..."...

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Posted in What Am I?

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I hope this piece isn't what

Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015

I hope this piece isn't what I think it is.

Abuse and the cover up presented to the children  "...Silly daddy I will say..."

A false front pretending all is well

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Posted in Happy families

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For lots of reasons this is a

Posted on Sat, 23 May 2015

For lots of reasons this is a real delight to read sand lady.

Thought provoking I thought.

Kind regards

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Posted in Poem Unread

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Posted on Sat, 16 May 2015

 

"...I know that you keep some rooms  Closed..."

That's me hiding behind the barn door.

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Posted in The Therapy

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Next time I'm walking in the

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

Delightful.

Next time I'm walking in the hills and pause to drink from a stream, I shall think of this poem and save a few drops to sip later

 

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Posted in Where wild water flows

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A nice snapshot of nature

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

A nice snapshot of nature here sand lady.

"...tattooed by the sun..."    I liked this line, a lovely sweet image
 

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Posted in Spotted at Dawn

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I really enjoyed reading this

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2015

I really enjoyed reading this  window tale, all the little snippets of estate living.

I only hope he doesn't clean the window you have as a picture, beautiful colours that don't need rinsing off.  

ps Reminds of an Edward Hopper...

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Posted in Peep Show

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