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i need advice on real life issues this is not a story

The Ballad of Bill McNally

In the shadows of an alley Lurked that wastrel Bill McNally A cigarette cupped in one tar stained hand, In the other was a knife He'd come to take a life
Cherry

Another Obstacle

And distance falls, becomes another obstacle. It stands in the way, guarding against The possibility of movement. A turning becomes a kind of stillness As motion turns in on itself.

Winter's Forgotten

Never will they reconcile themselves to the doorway of loneliness...

One Peasant Boy In Roughened Garb.

In time of wavemakers, time of a navigators art, t'was said, then, "Many lives were lost! Many souls torn-apart!"

You Know When It's Right

You just know when its right....

On the Right Side of Life (prose poem)

My route passes by a slough of murky water, good for ducks, dozens of them as they feather in flight, no time for bonding right now, only for scooting on by.

Life is so Precious

When I smile I see God’s face

Ouch

In all the forest, they are kings.

Butterfly

An attempt at a sonnet

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