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Sim. This is a wonderful
Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023
Sim. This is a wonderful story. I was intrigued right from the beginning and it carried me to its end. Original and so well written. Brava !! I look forward to many more of your short stories. Thank you
Your writing is wonderful. I loved your ghostly story and look forward to more from you. a brave heroine to go down to the crypt to see the bones were indeed gone, from above and below. They left by the golden ladder. I love it. ...
Your words have brought me to tears. Your exquisite merging with the nature of nature that you feel and can somehow find words and rhythms in line, that lift off the page to my very soul. God has indeed Blessed you with your...
your words are so deeply moving. They gently pull the reader to read between your lines, to somehow mingle with your spoken and unspoken meanings. Marcia
Thank you Jenny, for this beautiful poem. Your words drew me into the place. I was there, seeing all the reflections of life that moved to the rhythms of evening on this water.
I felt peace as I read your words, and after
Sim. This is a wonderful
Posted on Sun, 05 Nov 2023
Sim. This is a wonderful story. I was intrigued right from the beginning and it carried me to its end. Original and so well written. Brava !! I look forward to many more of your short stories. Thank you
MM
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Hi Sim
Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023
Hi Sim
Your writing is wonderful. I loved your ghostly story and look forward to more from you. a brave heroine to go down to the crypt to see the bones were indeed gone, from above and below. They left by the golden ladder. I love it. ...
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Sim. I love this story. It
Posted on Mon, 04 Sep 2023
Sim. I love this story. It grabbed me instantly and took me on the wonderful journey with the characters. It's all there. Bravo!! MM
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Jennifer
Posted on Wed, 17 Aug 2022
Jennifer
Your words have brought me to tears. Your exquisite merging with the nature of nature that you feel and can somehow find words and rhythms in line, that lift off the page to my very soul. God has indeed Blessed you with your...
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Jennifer
Posted on Wed, 24 Aug 2022
Jennifer
your words go beyond words and become like music in the air. Your writing is so very beautiful.
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Jennifer
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
Jennifer
your words are so deeply moving. They gently pull the reader to read between your lines, to somehow mingle with your spoken and unspoken meanings. Marcia
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I had such fun reading this
Posted on Sat, 27 Aug 2022
I had such fun reading this piece. I felt like a child again. A wonderful read. A good children's book. Thank you. Marcia
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Thank you whoever wrote this
Posted on Sun, 26 Sep 2021
Thank you Jenny, for this beautiful poem. Your words drew me into the place. I was there, seeing all the reflections of life that moved to the rhythms of evening on this water.
I felt peace as I read your words, and after
again...
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And in the middle, however
Posted on Tue, 29 Jun 2021
And in the middle, however timed, is the journey af the piece. Well done.
Read full commentThank you. Marcia
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Oh My God !!!
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2020
Oh My God !!!
Read full commentSoulful beauty in word
deeply sounded in pain
bottomless pitted in longing...
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