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You evoke a wistful tale with

Posted on Sat, 29 Jul 2023

You evoke a wistful tale with an ironic finale. A chance meeting that spans the ages. We all change over time. Who determines whether we have changed for the better? Nicely done :) 

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"The green that can trigger

Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023

"The green that can trigger

the chemicals in air and water."

A sweeping resume of the chain of life. I like the way you get underneath the bonnet of nature's mechanism. We should stand and acknowledge it from time to time. Nicely...

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"Winter raw, sky is grey

Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2023

"Winter raw, sky is grey

all is covered with a white duvet.."

 

Evocative and beautiful imagery, Rhiannon. Another lovely vignette. Paul 

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That's a beautiful image for

Posted on Fri, 28 Jul 2023

That's a beautiful image for so early in the morning, Richard. An evocative poem that brought a smile to my face. Just lovely. Paul 

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"Kingfisher blue

Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023

"Kingfisher blue

has a shimmering hue..

A visual vignette loaded with colour. So much said in so few words. Nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul 

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"...just a dreamer

Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023

"...just a dreamer

who survives in shadows.."

 

Beautifully put but I think you are so much more than that, Jenny. A poem that eloquently underlines your love of writing and artfully depicts how many others feel. Paul :) 

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Yes, dogs can be like that -

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023

Yes, dogs can be like that - a beast to one person and as soft as butter with someone else. You held the tension all the way through, Jane. The weaving in of the family background and issues was deftly done. A very credible, enjoyable story...

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Yes, 1-1 after extra time and

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023

Yes, 1-1 after extra time and, funnily enough, I can't remember the penalty shoot out score or probably choose to forget. Glad the Muggins clan caught the match even if it did end in disappointment. Onwards to the next tale of Alfred N Muggins...

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"This delightful Balkan woman

Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023

"This delightful Balkan woman with flashing eyes and stainless steel teeth.."

Reading your stories feels like catching up with an old friend you haven't seen in a while. Yes, a free flowing, chatty style that reels the reader in and...

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Ah so this story will run on.

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

Ah so this story will run on. This is good. You are building the tension nicely and the weaving in of the family history adds its own tension. Looking forward to more :)

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