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1561 of my comments have received 1582 Great Feedback votes

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Good that you are still

Posted on Mon, 15 Aug 2022

Good that you are still smiling, Jean. Keep fighting the good fight and take care of yourself. Paul x

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Posted in Chemo 5

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Yes, I like the way each

Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022

Yes, I like the way each stanza starts with a word. Very nicely done. Paul

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Posted in The Gift

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"recesses leading to burls

Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2022

"recesses leading to burls

of fascination"

 

Contemplative, reflective, meditative. Conversations with local oaks are the best kind. Paul :)

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All caught up with this one.

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

All caught up with this one. The fat suit aspect reminds me of a sub plot in the book I am reading at the moment - "Billy Summers" by Stephen King (about an assassin). Your dialogue-driven story arc gives you a distinct identity. It makes for...

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I like the weather forecast

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

I like the weather forecast interludes and the folklore aspect of the story. You do this style of poem so well. Dark, foreboding, magical.. 

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Posted in The Witch’s Daughter

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Ah thanks for pointing those

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

Ah thanks for pointing those out, Di. Now sorted. Glad you liked it - part 2 up soon. It's written....just needs a final check and a decision re recording another audio. "There was six" will sound so coloquial on this audio! Paul :)

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Another lovely recollection.

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

Another lovely recollection. Petrol 35p a gallon - imagine that! Enjoyed this latest diary entry and chuffed that you connected this with a piece of my work. Very honoured indeed. Paul x

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Posted in Along Cornish Coast

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Posted on Mon, 08 Aug 2022

Beautiful words and images so simply put. Just lovely, Richard. And I hope you are keeping well. Paul 

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Posted in Glorious Moments

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"...what do the roots say? In

Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022

"...what do the roots say? In darkness

stumped for why we kill that which gives us life."

A poem full of imagery and powerful messaging. Life is full of contradictions - especially at the moment..

 

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Posted in logging evidence of us

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Very expressively written.

Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022

Very expressively written. The images are evocative which makes this an effective, short story. Enjoyed. Paul 

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