Tight Negotiating this tight line Your will on one side And mine: On the other. Respect for you Versus: My desires. I wish the tight rope would SNAP...
A double session with the final years. Four years of trying, four years of giving, four years of teaching and assessing and now they are beginning to...
So different to your normal lyricism. Personally, I liked the short, sharp, down-to-reality nature of the narration and the excellent manner in which you conveyed the gut churning anger (totally woedend!...
Tina, I've been on Moonphish's case for awhile about getting his stuff in an anthology and by greatness I hope you have done so with yours too! Your grandkids / great-nieces and nephews need to know that they come from an amazingly talented gene-...
... pictured your hand on the cot and the love of a family member related to the precious sleeping jewel of hope. Always a pleasure to create my own images from your descriptions as they are never didactically given. Stay fabulous! $
... the ending so unexpected, and so unfair. Innocence trashed by adults in so many respects and the adults don't care, because it was what they were taught, how they were taught and the cycle of horror continues round and round and round all...
My guess is that any woman who can't relate to this poem hasn't lived the complete experience of being a woman... wow j, for this to come from a guy, the empathy and accuracy, awesome. Well Done... and hey look, you're a poet for sure now ;-)...
I like the take from an old woman today. I wish people would learn... Isreal, Afghanistan, Asia... it is so horrific... so horrific... a few elite who want power, who's ego's aren't satisfied, and thousands suffer for it... horrible.
One second, one moment, can triggered so many things never before expected or thought, but often inevitable... it's just the timing that decides when exactly the dance shall be danced... Hope you are well Bee, have a great weekend $
And the patterns...
Posted on Sat, 31 Jan 2015
... of the Luton arranged sky match the treads of the cars tyres in the snow below :-)
Such wonders in every 'normal' day... thanks for making them picturesque Tina.
Thanks for asking - been a challenging start to our school year,...
Read full commentPosted in Late January Morn
Lovely change in tack
Posted on Thu, 11 Dec 2014
So different to your normal lyricism. Personally, I liked the short, sharp, down-to-reality nature of the narration and the excellent manner in which you conveyed the gut churning anger (totally woedend!...
Read full commentPosted in Spiegel im Spiegel
Such TALENT!
Posted on Tue, 02 Dec 2014
Tina, I've been on Moonphish's case for awhile about getting his stuff in an anthology and by greatness I hope you have done so with yours too! Your grandkids / great-nieces and nephews need to know that they come from an amazingly talented gene-...
Read full commentPosted in Breaking Glass
So real Tina...
Posted on Thu, 06 Nov 2014
... pictured your hand on the cot and the love of a family member related to the precious sleeping jewel of hope. Always a pleasure to create my own images from your descriptions as they are never didactically given. Stay fabulous! $
Read full commentPosted in Letters from the Dead
So haunting Tina...
Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014
... the ending so unexpected, and so unfair. Innocence trashed by adults in so many respects and the adults don't care, because it was what they were taught, how they were taught and the cycle of horror continues round and round and round all...
Read full commentPosted in Blue with Raspberry Paisley
And by defintion...
Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2014
- a person who writes poems.
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Read full commentsynonyms:verse writer, versifier,
Posted in Secrets and Seashells
This is real...
Posted on Mon, 11 Aug 2014
My guess is that any woman who can't relate to this poem hasn't lived the complete experience of being a woman... wow j, for this to come from a guy, the empathy and accuracy, awesome. Well Done... and hey look, you're a poet for sure now ;-)...
Read full commentPosted in Secrets and Seashells
I like the take from an old
Posted on Mon, 14 Jul 2014
I like the take from an old woman today. I wish people would learn... Isreal, Afghanistan, Asia... it is so horrific... so horrific... a few elite who want power, who's ego's aren't satisfied, and thousands suffer for it... horrible.
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Read full commentPosted in Kuroi Ame (Black Rain)
Ahhh, wish my learning to
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014
Ahhh, wish my learning to skip stones was as romantic as your lesson ... beautifully captured in a lovely sincerity :-) Hope you are well. $
Read full commentPosted in Stones
One second, one moment, can
Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014
One second, one moment, can triggered so many things never before expected or thought, but often inevitable... it's just the timing that decides when exactly the dance shall be danced... Hope you are well Bee, have a great weekend $
Read full commentPosted in Crash
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