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Palpable Tension
Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2014
This continues to be pacey. I like the balance between dialogue and description, I think that in this particular episode you have got it pretty much spot on. Just be a little more aware of the action/reaction tags:
"Oldcastle marched...
Read full commentPosted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Nine 1010 words
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Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014
Awful first memory. So sorry.
Read full commentPosted in Walking Thru Shards Of Glass
Lol! Good one Mr. A couple
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014
Lol! Good one Mr. A couple of typos need your attention:
"Hes (He's) late they cry."
"She Walk (walks) in a strop."
"Dinners (Dinner's / Dinner is) on the table" (although it works as it appears in the poem)....
Read full commentPosted in Running Late
Top Quality
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014
Ed, this is really excellent. The claustrophobia of the murder scene at the end is incredible. A convincing voice too. The themes of I'll gotten gains, disloyalty, the thickness of thieves and revenge takes a leap off the screen. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in X-Ray and I
;-))
Posted on Sat, 21 Jun 2014
So delicately written Richard. This whole series has been a joy to read, keep them coming.
"stretched it out as far as they (it) would go"
Read full commentPosted in The Dragon of Nottingham - The Beach Recordings - Part One
Excellent
Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014
Very good poem here Tina. I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time. Wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in No Fairy-Tale – This
Hello Omar!
Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014
Ok you said that you would value some feedback? First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain. I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...
Read full commentPosted in Into Darkness: Chapter 1, Section(s) 5 & 6
Welcome
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
Honest and heartfelt. I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.
Read full commentPosted in Uncovered In Recovery
<(8-))
Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
There y' go.
ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.
Read full commentPosted in Unbounders Away
Good Feedback
Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014
Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on. I think that it was the right alteration to make.
I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time. The themes and...
Read full commentPosted in Pretty Wings
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