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197 of my comments have received 214 Great Feedback votes

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Palpable Tension

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2014

This continues to be pacey. I like the balance between dialogue and description, I think that in this particular episode you have got it pretty much spot on. Just be a little more aware of the action/reaction tags:

"Oldcastle marched...

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Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Nine 1010 words

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8**(

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014

Awful first memory. So sorry.

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Posted in Walking Thru Shards Of Glass

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Lol! Good one Mr. A couple

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014

Lol! Good one Mr. A couple of typos need your attention:

"Hes (He's) late they cry."

"She Walk (walks) in a strop."

"Dinners (Dinner's / Dinner is) on the table" (although it works as it appears in the poem)....

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Posted in Running Late

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Top Quality

Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2014

Ed, this is really excellent. The claustrophobia of the murder scene at the end is incredible. A convincing voice too. The themes of I'll gotten gains, disloyalty, the thickness of thieves and revenge takes a leap off the screen. Well done.

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Posted in X-Ray and I

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;-))

Posted on Sat, 21 Jun 2014

So delicately written Richard. This whole series has been a joy to read, keep them coming.

"stretched it out as far as they (it) would go"

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Posted in The Dragon of Nottingham - The Beach Recordings - Part One

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014

Very good poem here Tina. I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time. Wonderful.

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Posted in No Fairy-Tale – This

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Hello Omar!

Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014

Ok you said that you would value some feedback? First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain. I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...

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Posted in Into Darkness: Chapter 1, Section(s) 5 & 6

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