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Action packed and fast moving
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
Action packed and fast moving. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Antonio Solar: Origins of an Empire
Didn't want to like it but I
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2014
Didn't want to like it but I had no choice. Bloody excellent.
Read full commentPosted in Stacey on the Lunch
It pulled me in too.
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2014
It pulled me in too.
I would like to see a re-work of the first two stanzas, or better still be braver and start at the beginning of the third and work to make thereafter even better than it is already - if that's possible.
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Read full commentPosted in Magic Lantern
Well that's a big relief. I
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014
Well that's a big relief.
I was hugely concerned that you might feel (understandably) that I had been unkind, focussing only on what I thought was amiss. I really ought to have said also that the intrigue that you have created is deep...
Read full commentPosted in Under the Ice (2)
Jenny Is Right
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
I really like this one. The rhyme is good and that quality is accentuated by a strong rhythm, the effect provides the reader with the sense that the poet is confident and trustworthy.
Very good.
Read full commentPosted in On Writing
Just Read This
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2014
You are very good at tackling 'difficult' subjects that most of us avoid by taking the easy option and ignoring them.
I'm glad Torscot clarified! Of course I can see what she/he was getting at with the reversal of gender roles.
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Read full commentPosted in SMACK - (edited)
You're welcome. Thank you
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2014
You're welcome. Thank you regarding the Daniel series.
You will find that writing prose for on-line reading has an effect on the discrete episodes. It causes a faster pace to develop and the reader gets a pay-off for their efforts at...
Read full commentPosted in Thetis
Philip, you will find
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
Philip, you will find ABCtales to be a supportive, nurturing and welcoming place. There are many excellent writers here, you can learn lots - I for one should know - have a good nosey around the place. Above all else I would encourage...
Read full commentPosted in Marking Time
Quite!
Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014
Quite!
Read full commentPosted in Toady of toad hall. (a warning to children)
Lovely overall images. This
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2014
Lovely overall images. This I found less delightfully unctuous than the rest:
"ever so slightly at the edges, and a blackbird
going home to roost, dreams of sleeping"
The italicised words seem less economical and...
Read full commentPosted in After the Heat Wave
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