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204 of my comments have received 222 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014

Very good poem here Tina.  I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time.  Wonderful.

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Posted in No Fairy-Tale – This

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Hello Omar!

Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014

Ok you said that you would value some feedback?  First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain.  I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...

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Welcome

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

Honest and heartfelt.  I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.

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Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

There y' go.

ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.

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Posted in Unbounders Away

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Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014

Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on.  I think that it was the right alteration to make.

I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time.  The themes and...

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8**(

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014

What can I say?

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Posted in The Bloody Spikes

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Justified Anger

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014

So totally agree with this AD1.  I said somewhere else that every single one of those spikes is this country's shameless equivalent of an African blood diamond.  What has this country been brought to.  It is an utter, unmitigated DISGRACE.

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Wow!

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

That is powerful.  The raw emotion tumbles out of it like the rocks out of the back of that lorry.  Odd that we both should touch on the theme of hypocrisy but approach it in different ways and different genres.  Conviction oozes out from this...

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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Superb!

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014

This gets better and better as it progresses.  So many good things could be said about this one paul_a.  But I'll just leave it at that.  Well done.

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Posted in Just Add Egg

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A pacey and well written piece.

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014

Some typos to edit out.  Here's one to start with:

"She could almost taste the Warnick’s Advocat (Warninks Advocaat)."

and:

"I though (thought) chanting was supposed to chillax you?

This is...

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