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A big message on display

Posted on Sun, 04 Nov 2012

A big message on display here and some striking imagery (first two lines of the third stanza and the last two lines of the fifth to cite just two), a minor typo to sort out; 'The earth once stable under (our) feet'. May I suggest hyphenation here...Read full comment

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I'm so glad you reviewed

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2012

I'm so glad you reviewed this bluejohn, the flow is better and this allows the poetry to perform as it should. Well done.Read full comment

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Great stevehawk. Good twist

Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2011

Great stevehawk. Good twist it kept me honest to the last.Read full comment

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