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203 of my comments have received 220 Great Feedback votes

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I love it elsie.  The

Posted on Mon, 09 Sep 2013

I love it elsie.  The formatting is striking and appropriate.  Really good job here.  I think that there is a tiny typo?:

 
"Rain reponsive (responsive) to"
 

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Right, here's my pounds

Posted on Mon, 20 May 2013

Right, here's my pounds worth: If that is the first thing that you have written since you left school then you have got to carry on. Don't stress about anything other than producing more writing like this that you have posted. It's got freshness...Read full comment

Posted in Dragged up (1983)

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I think this operates very

Posted on Thu, 14 Mar 2013

I think this operates very well on a variety of levels. A great inspiration these stone circles and from a poet's perspective pregnant with potential. You have tapped this potential with skill. I didn't see the first draft (if one was posted, or...Read full comment

Posted in Standing Stones

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Keep it going.

Posted on Mon, 04 Feb 2013

Keep it going.Read full comment

Posted in Achates

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Short and sweet Gawain.

Posted on Sun, 27 Jan 2013

Short and sweet Gawain. There's a nice synergy in there which I also like a lot.Read full comment

Posted in Changes

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A big message on display

Posted on Sun, 04 Nov 2012

A big message on display here and some striking imagery (first two lines of the third stanza and the last two lines of the fifth to cite just two), a minor typo to sort out; 'The earth once stable under (our) feet'. May I suggest hyphenation here...Read full comment

Posted in Status of men

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We don't need to know that a

Posted on Wed, 18 Apr 2012

We don't need to know that a chair is plastic we can see it anyway. But listen parsons I have read more of it an it's good, no doubt.Read full comment

Posted in Abraham Jones - Pt 3

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I'm so glad you reviewed

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2012

I'm so glad you reviewed this bluejohn, the flow is better and this allows the poetry to perform as it should. Well done.Read full comment

Posted in Three years, 1 day

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Great stevehawk. Good twist

Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2011

Great stevehawk. Good twist it kept me honest to the last.Read full comment

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