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Drew Gummerson
Author of Me and Mickie James (Jonathan Cape) and The Lodger (GMP), and many stories here and there. Follow me at @drewgum. Seven Nights At The Flamingo Hotel is coming November 2020. Pre-order here https://www.beardedbadgerpublishing.com/online-store
It feels full of hope! Love
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
It feels full of hope! Love it.
Read full commentPosted in Vernal Equinox
Ok. So, I like what happens
Posted on Fri, 05 Mar 2021
Ok. So, I like what happens within the story. Getting up to the window is too long. He needs to land on his arse quicker. So I'd cut some there. The monologue about his woes is too long. The speech back and forth between them is excellent. I'd...
Read full commentPosted in Sharks
I love its simplicity, that
Posted on Mon, 01 Mar 2021
I love its simplicity, that of a single moment. But it's so moving.
Read full commentPosted in Hand Washing, Glasgow Central
I loved it. Was there in 1991
Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021
I loved it. Was there in 1991. I was a student. And in Milwaukee. As per Flamingo Hotel. It's all true! (Well, not quite.)
Read full commentPosted in New Amsterdam
It's great.
Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2021
It's great.
One point of style. After a lot of your direct speech, you have, 'sais' and then a present participle...
'McDade sais, tryin tae sound authoritative'
'Scanlon sais, noddin'
'ah sais, scramblin fur...
Read full commentPosted in The Party ay the Year (Part One)
It's lovely. But very sad.
Posted on Wed, 17 Feb 2021
It's lovely. But very sad.
Read full commentPosted in Lyrebird
Great stuff. Glad you got
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021
Great stuff. Glad you got jabbed. Now you're a red arrow can you loop the loop?
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 14: The Joy of Jabbing
Really? I can't believe it's
Posted on Tue, 19 Jan 2021
Really? I can't believe it's been that long. You know, it felt really comforting in this horrible current climate to return to something warm and reassuring. Write some more!
Read full commentPosted in Craven Unraveled
Really enjoyed this passage
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Really enjoyed this passage to India Paul.
Drew.
Read full commentPosted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh
I agree. One great poem after
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021
I agree. One great poem after another.
Read full commentPosted in Night With Her Train Of Stars
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