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Displaced American

Chutted, certificate 12, the Downs? She felt a hint of displacement She pressed on Observations and contributions to a minimum Intrigued she too read...

And the Oscar Goes to … Garlic

Few things are more sacred than garlic. It should be a staple in everyone’s kitchen. Packing big flavor in a tiny bulb, this key ingredient is...

Monkey Grass

Wheeled over with all your might you reach out to hug the sun. Your silvery fingers shine at each smooth arc. Your tips bounce in the breeze. Your...

Migraine

It approaches like a freight train, heavy steal, force, power. The wheels grind metal on metal. The whitsle warns louder and sharper than a pig. The...

Faeries, Frogs and the Unborn Infant

My faeries have been close by from an early age: Judgment, Maturity, Felicity and Promise. They watched over me as I made the decision at the age of...

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I really like your poem. It

Posted on Mon, 24 Aug 2015

I really like your poem. It has a cadence similar to a "running" pace and the adjectives used to describe the rain seem simple (not over done) and clearly place you in the runner's shoes. Nicely done!

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