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2114 of my comments have received 2179 Great Feedback votes

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I love how you conjure trees

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

I love how you conjure trees with "vaulted". And the long majestic sounds of "numinous looms" and "gull", contrasting with your coffee grounds pun (I liked that too) and the satsuma no longer solid. I can easily imagine finding a mouldy satsuma...

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love all your word sounds -

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

love all your word sounds - that last part specially, and the rhythm you create it is like billowing flames suddenly darting out as the wind changes. The poem gets more energy as it progresses, evoking the fear of uncontrolled fire, and then the...

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This is beautiful. "I let it

Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024

This is beautiful. "I let it hold me in its stirrings" is perfect for that need to look deep into flames, not look away, as if in respect for what is happening to the trees, their long lives.

" everything

that was long and lost....

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I am so sorry to hear that! I

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2024

I am so sorry to hear that! I hope it has been recognised to be through no fault of your own

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Posted in On the Shelf Again, so to speak! By Alfred N.Muggins

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That IS an interesting twist!

Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024

That IS an interesting twist! Poor Martha! Just when it seemed super complicated already!
Loved "fur" elise doorbell :0)

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To start with, it seemed the

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024

To start with, it seemed the dream country, somewhere anyone could earn a living by writing. But if all the writing is rubbish there, (because no one has to try, maybe?) why would anyone want to read? Even a good writer's mind might become...

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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! What a plot twist! Didn't see that one coming :0) Masterful storytelling!

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Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2024

Fabulous rhymes Luigi! Very enjoyable altogether :0) Gave me a strange impression of camels loaded up with cock-tail cabinets trekking across the desert

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You make a really good point,

Posted on Sat, 26 Oct 2024

You make a really good point, without letting your emotions overcome you, which is more than I have been able to do, the times I have tried the last few months!

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Posted in If Netanyahu and the Israelis should invade Britain? (Don’t panic! It’s only History repeating itself!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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"In the middle of the box was

Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024

"In the middle of the box was a circular glass lens, a black pupil surrounded by a luminous red iris." made me think of Sauron, not Hal :0) Glad the narrator made it out! And that Fritz was not Sauron, that he gave all his former students choice...

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