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I love the cat too di (it's

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

I love the cat too di (it's very Alice in Wonderland) - and you've described the disorientation of the fog really well, but I must say, I'm a bit confused about the grey stuff, and Karen not moving or speaking?

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Great contrast of images in

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

Great contrast of images in this piece - nicely done

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Posted in Carpe Diem

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A really moving description

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

A really moving description of the granny - beautifully done - and the interaction between Pearcey and the Dr

One thing though, here:

Pearcey’s been up every day this week awready. His granny’s no farin well. She’s went back intae ...

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a great ending - driving off

Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021

a great ending - driving off in the sunset and hopefully happier things!

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Posted in Broken wings still fly

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it must be really difficult,

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

it must be really difficult, because it is his story as you say (and how brilliant that he's forgotten) - but it's also your story and I can't even begin to imagine how traumatic it was for you 

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Posted in part 5

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I love the jackdaw bits if it

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

I love the jackdaw bits if it helps! - and I hope you do put more in about what happened, but it's going to be difficult if you're doing it from the child's POV. It's definitely a story that needs to be told

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Posted in part 5

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Where she throws all the

Posted on Sat, 16 Jan 2021

Where she throws all the money into the water - it's so moving. Poor Mary

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Posted in part 5

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Catching up - love the idea

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Catching up - love the idea of being warm inside with your thoughts, waiting for Spring - thanks for this Jenny!

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Posted in Drifting On The Muse

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we don't have them here as

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

we don't have them here as far as I know, or at least they don't seem to be as unwilded as in some areas - how frightening that they swooped at your cat!! Beautiful creatures though, as is this poem

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You took me right there with

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

You took me right there with you - thank you, and congratulations on the very well deserved pick!

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