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Nice build up of tension this
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
Nice build up of tension this part
couple of things:
bulb dangling from a chord on the ceiling
Her tartan, plaid skirt
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That reads much better now.
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
That reads much better now. About the dialogue: one of the best pieces of writing advice I ever received was from Ewan, years ago - about trying very hard not to make things obvious - eg 'is that a dagger I see before me?'. I always remember that...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)
This is our Poem of the Month
Posted on Mon, 06 Jun 2022
This is our Poem of the Month - Congratulations!
Read full commentPosted in Meet Ze Monsta
I completely missed out on
Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022
I completely missed out on this wonderful interpretation - thanks for posting and congratulations on the cherries. Some of the old fairytales were very grim weren't they! The Disney versions are so one dimensional
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I'm very intrigued to know
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
I'm very intrigued to know more - some good scene setting in this part!
A few suggestions:
Little Bobby Weaver/a small boy - but he's a teenager? Also much further down he's referred to as little again
Are you sure Nokia is a...
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Thank you for this onemore -
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
Thank you for this onemore - my favourite time, and you've recreated it in words
Read full commentPosted in Goldenrod and Wild Aster
I wish you all the best of
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
I wish you all the best of luck Jean and will think of you on Thursday (with crossed fingers)
Read full commentPosted in Chemo
Beautiful - thank you so much
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
Beautiful - thank you so much Jenny!
Read full commentPosted in Harvest Mouse
Thank you for taking me to
Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022
Thank you for taking me to this wonderful place with you - it sounds so peaceful. Very well deserved golden cherries!
Read full commentPosted in On Oddicombe Beach
Hah! I didn't see it until
Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022
Hah! I didn't see it until now (summary doesn't appear on the unreads)
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