Picture by pixabay free images. A Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Fifteen Monday morning came, it was always busy for Kendrick, spending a good part...
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to know that you relate to this poem is so pleasing. I'm such an emotional person who gets immersed in words, I just had to get my feelings down before they disappeared for good...which so easily can happen.
Have to say I congratulate you on giving up the alcohol, I gave it up for six months after my hip replacement, but couldn't wait to return to drinking wine again...I find it relaxes my anxiety, that along with writing too.
There's such a natural flow to your writing Turlough. The observations of the folk and especially Maria give the reader a sense of a neighbourly location. I loved the idea of the older folk sitting around chatting, though don't think I could...
you are so gifted and on my wavelength when it comes to writing. This is definitely a poem you should be very proud of, with its conjuring of the dark crows who scatter and flee, searching for sanctuary away from thankless...
A vivid account of narration of not only the enviroment, but also the evoccative history you've encountered on your journey. Very much enjoyed reading.
I have never heard of this moth before, but managed to find a youtube video showing this remarkable little flying insect. Your poem describes perfectly its remarkable existence Di.
Oh dear! Amber's made the worst possible mistake by hitting Frankie over the head...how on earth are they going to get that tyre fixed now? I wonder! what they'll do next. Can't wait to find out more.
They say it's not the
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
They say it's not the quantity but the quality that counts. I just love the idea of the Kingfisher blue with its shimmering hue, and blueberries too.
Nicely done Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Nature's blues
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Hi Turlough,
to know that you relate to this poem is so pleasing. I'm such an emotional person who gets immersed in words, I just had to get my feelings down before they disappeared for good...which so easily can happen.
I'm very...
Read full commentPosted in When All I Need Is Artistry
Have to say I congratulate
Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023
Have to say I congratulate you on giving up the alcohol, I gave it up for six months after my hip replacement, but couldn't wait to return to drinking wine again...I find it relaxes my anxiety, that along with writing too.
It's amazing...
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria – Part Two of Two
There's such a natural flow
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
There's such a natural flow to your writing Turlough. The observations of the folk and especially Maria give the reader a sense of a neighbourly location. I loved the idea of the older folk sitting around chatting, though don't think I could...
Read full commentPosted in Rakia Maria - Part One of Two
Phew! That was such a
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023
Phew! That was such a terrifying experience. I can't imagine being in such a situation.
Very much enjoyed reading Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blueberry - Part Three
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023
Hi Paul,
you are so gifted and on my wavelength when it comes to writing. This is definitely a poem you should be very proud of, with its conjuring of the dark crows who scatter and flee, searching for sanctuary away from thankless...
Read full commentPosted in A Murder of Crows
What a chilling ending Jane.
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2023
What a chilling ending Jane. It had me wondering if there was a continuation to this story, I would love to know how she got out of the predicament.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blueberry
A vivid account of narration
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023
A vivid account of narration of not only the enviroment, but also the evoccative history you've encountered on your journey. Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Our Man in Golubac
I have never heard of this
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023
I have never heard of this moth before, but managed to find a youtube video showing this remarkable little flying insect. Your poem describes perfectly its remarkable existence Di.
A great tribute.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in agriphila straminella
Oh dear! Amber's made the
Posted on Fri, 21 Jul 2023
Oh dear! Amber's made the worst possible mistake by hitting Frankie over the head...how on earth are they going to get that tyre fixed now? I wonder! what they'll do next. Can't wait to find out more.
You are really keeping the suspense...
Read full commentPosted in Under Pressure (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 27)
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