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Dad
Dear diary, keeping dad's memory. Seduced by changing tides of emotions, dad your addiction trawled through troubled waters, body cravings, stained...
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Just We Two
Tuesday 15 th May 2018. Walk along the Ridge Way by Fox Hill. Peeping Sun was faint above clouds, as birds chirped on the breeze, hearing them sing,...
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Rhythm Power
Get to Club Eighteen hitting music scene, pumping out D J Power begins at the eleventh hour, feeling all them thumping beats with rhythm fever body...
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In To The Deep
Skeleton shapes majestic combing down below, cling to bedrock ocean under coverlet of blue, jointed stems gripping coral, schools of color shimmy a...
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Missing You
Emotive thoughts of loved ones embodied in us all, we'll talk about our losses until out of words I'm sure, sitting here in silence till weakness...
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What an absolutely adorable
Posted on Fri, 16 Jun 2023
What an absolutely adorable story Paul, and so much detail has gone into setting the scenes, I could almost hear, feel and smell the bustling scene of the fish market. Beautifully written and well deserved of the acolades.
You've done it...
Read full commentPosted in A Cat, A Leaf and Fresh Fish
Dear Jean,
Posted on Wed, 14 Jun 2023
Dear Jean,
I've read all the above comments, and can only echo what has already been said. You're an inspiration that I can see is admired by many...including myself.
I hope you find comfort at this time, and no that by sharing your...
Read full commentPosted in Cancer Log 3
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023
Hi Paul,
your researching has paid off. I particularly found the descriptions of Titan's atmosphere so believable, and felt as if I myself was stepping on to the alien planet.
I wonder if he did spy a fish tail at the end. That's...
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)
The contact James receives
Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023
The contact James receives from his wife and family was so moving to read, I can imagine after nine years they have all moved on. But then space and time are irrelevant when love conquers all.
You are adept at creating people who though...
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)
I feel problems on the
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
I feel problems on the horizon for Chantelle, Josiah and Archibald, but only the passage of time will tell.
I keep wondering if D.I. Woods and D.S. Stone will latch on to the fact that it's Frankie Knight in the coffin.
Hopefully we...
Read full commentPosted in Summer Holiday? (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 21)
Hi Paul,
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
Hi Paul,
your narration of the ship and its occupants is spot on. I felt like a fly on the wall from your descriptions. I also agree with Rhiannon, there's so much gone into this story, it must have taken a lot of careful studying.
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Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)
There's nothing like the
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
There's nothing like the delicate evocative poem to remind us of the beauty all around. Your study and photos shine through and leave the reader smiling. ...
Read full commentPosted in June Roadsides
Dense forests can be
Posted on Thu, 08 Jun 2023
Dense forests can be beautiful, and yet be a place of so much drama. You've skillfully evoked the couples misfortune, and set the scene for a confrontation.
Look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Newlyweds part 2
I liked all the little
Posted on Sun, 04 Jun 2023
I liked all the little details of the wedding, imagining the speeches and the newly weds first dance.
I can't imagine where their first day exploring the forest is going to take them, but I look forward to finding out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Newlyweds part 1
This is an absolutely
Posted on Sun, 04 Jun 2023
This is an absolutely beautiful poem Penny. You conjure up a work of magic that's deeply hypnotic, that I could read again and again.
Congrats on the well deserved cherries, and thank you so much for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "A Little Rhyme"
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