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This is such a special piece
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
A great read Rhiannon, reminding me of my chamber maid days, working at the Holiday Inn in Bristol. We had to change about fifteen to twenty five beds a day, I think I became an expert by the time I left that job.
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there wasn't any permanent damage and you're getting the help you need. Your daughter sounds so supportive and beneficial to you getting better.
Hopefully writing this could help someone else in the same situation to...
Oh dear, you seem to have been through so much with not only the shock of finding yourself with Bels Palsy, but having to sit and wait for four hours on your own. It reminded me of my experience in A & E waiting for eight hours to see a...
I can understand why they included it in their glossy promotional literature. A fine example of what you are seeing is written here, taking the reader on a journey to a place I'm sure not many people have been...I certainly have'nt been and will...
There's nothing better than a sky that's so full of such gorgous colours. I loved your poem of expression, it went with the photo and captured that scene so well.
This is such a special piece
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One-leaf therapy
I can identify with your
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
Read full commentPosted in Outline of a Man
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Hi Turlough,
a poem that moves so effortlessly, yet I can see you've put so much care and attention to detail into setting the scene of desperation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
A great read Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
A great read Rhiannon, reminding me of my chamber maid days, working at the Holiday Inn in Bristol. We had to change about fifteen to twenty five beds a day, I think I became an expert by the time I left that job.
Your poem definitely took...
Read full commentPosted in Duvet!
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there
Posted on Tue, 01 Feb 2022
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there wasn't any permanent damage and you're getting the help you need. Your daughter sounds so supportive and beneficial to you getting better.
Hopefully writing this could help someone else in the same situation to...
Read full commentPosted in Janus Look 2
Oh dear, you seem to have
Posted on Mon, 31 Jan 2022
Oh dear, you seem to have been through so much with not only the shock of finding yourself with Bels Palsy, but having to sit and wait for four hours on your own. It reminded me of my experience in A & E waiting for eight hours to see a...
Read full commentPosted in The Janus Look 1
It's always great to read an
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
It's always great to read an original story with a twist, like Mark said, adding the touch of fantasy gives adventure and wonder to the reader.
I very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Locksmith (Part 2)
This is a charming story,
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
This is a charming story, full of the wonder of childhood. On to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Locksmith (Part 1)
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
I can understand why they included it in their glossy promotional literature. A fine example of what you are seeing is written here, taking the reader on a journey to a place I'm sure not many people have been...I certainly have'nt been and will...
Read full commentPosted in Maglic Moments
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 28 Jan 2022
There's nothing better than a sky that's so full of such gorgous colours. I loved your poem of expression, it went with the photo and captured that scene so well.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Some January colour
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