Sound of storm carries restless dreams as zestful spirits run and play gathering in empty streets. Rollicking in wet grass verges. Down pour rampant...
It's a sad fact that we live in an age where you have to be so careful with not only car insurance, but a lot of other things too. I feel especially sorry for old people that don't understand technology. I always use the phone, because I too like...
When I read your comment that this poem was about a true incident, it had me in mind of the strange foods that some people will devour that I've seen on tv. I like how you've given the poem a rhythm and rhyme, gives it such a poetic stance that...
To have a house filled with music is such a treasure. Is this about your son learning a new song Di? If It is, it must be wonderful to have a young person who wants to be a musician, and through your poem it sounds like you give him much...
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of those nature watch programmes on tv, but in written form. It's wonderful that you can record your experience in a poem. I felt the drama of catching a glimpse of these fine creatures.
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2023
Hi Penny,
I love the way you've handled the plot, and Emily becoming suspicious she's being watched, only to find the disc in Sir Harry's dog collar.
Really looking forward to finding out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 10
Another part of yourf story
Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023
Another part of yourf story that's just too irresistible to ignore, and which I very much enjoyed reading while having my lunch. ...
Read full commentPosted in Pack Up! (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 20)
A beautiful observation of
Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023
A beautiful observation of your walk Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Around Longtown, upper Monnow Valley
An unflinching account of a
Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2023
An unflinching account of a son's determination to succeed in life. You captured his determination very well, and drew me in from the beginning.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The 'Mary Lou'
It's a sad fact that we live
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
It's a sad fact that we live in an age where you have to be so careful with not only car insurance, but a lot of other things too. I feel especially sorry for old people that don't understand technology. I always use the phone, because I too like...
Read full commentPosted in It Is Enough To Make You Walk!
When I read your comment that
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
When I read your comment that this poem was about a true incident, it had me in mind of the strange foods that some people will devour that I've seen on tv. I like how you've given the poem a rhythm and rhyme, gives it such a poetic stance that...
Read full commentPosted in Ladies who lunch at The Entomol
Lovely poem Richard, and a
Posted on Thu, 01 Jun 2023
Lovely poem Richard, and a great tribute to the fine blackbird.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Joy of Flying
To have a house filled with
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
To have a house filled with music is such a treasure. Is this about your son learning a new song Di? If It is, it must be wonderful to have a young person who wants to be a musician, and through your poem it sounds like you give him much...
Read full commentPosted in new song
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of those nature watch programmes on tv, but in written form. It's wonderful that you can record your experience in a poem. I felt the drama of catching a glimpse of these fine creatures.
I can imagine it...
Read full commentPosted in Ranthambore
Another enjoyable amusing
Posted on Fri, 26 May 2023
Another enjoyable amusing read that absorbed my interest.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ocean Drive (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 19)
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