Gran used to tell me: significance gave value to a biscuit tin full of old family photos, lost memories some now hazy, as time moves on ragged at the...
We shot through space resembling bullets from a gun – flew across the milky way as stars exploded all around, souls spirited away, slipping into slow...
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Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
I'm like you as I come nearer to the age of 70 which seems to creep up so quickly. The mind is saying so much, yet the body is slowing down and just can't cope with all the chaos, it just gives me anxiety thinking about it, just not worth...
Crikey! What a story...a real horror. Your description was so clear, I felt like I was there watching it all transpire. When he's opening the bedroom door and crawling in, I could feel the fear and panic his wife must have felt. Great story to...
you're not going to believe this, but your poem bought back childhood memories for me. I must have been about eight at the time, when me and my friends would bring our jewels to school in fancy sweet tins or buscuit tins and swap...
Death is horrible where loved ones are concerned, it must have been incredibly sad for Mary loosing John Charles, especially knowing how ill he was. Thank goodness she had her daughter Mary, along with Charles and Walter, at least that must have...
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
I'm like you as I come nearer to the age of 70 which seems to creep up so quickly. The mind is saying so much, yet the body is slowing down and just can't cope with all the chaos, it just gives me anxiety thinking about it, just not worth...
Read full commentPosted in Brief Moments To Imagine
You paint such a vibrant
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022
You paint such a vibrant picture with words in your poem. It sounds like a wonderful inspiring place to live. Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Coral Bay
This is gorgeous Rachel, a
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022
This is gorgeous Rachel, a fine tribute to such a stunning bird. A poem I very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Nightingale’s Song
Crikey! What a story...a real
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2022
Crikey! What a story...a real horror. Your description was so clear, I felt like I was there watching it all transpire. When he's opening the bedroom door and crawling in, I could feel the fear and panic his wife must have felt. Great story to...
Read full commentPosted in The other half
Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2022
Hi Jane,
you're not going to believe this, but your poem bought back childhood memories for me. I must have been about eight at the time, when me and my friends would bring our jewels to school in fancy sweet tins or buscuit tins and swap...
Read full commentPosted in Junk Jewellery
I almost teared up at the end
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2022
I almost teared up at the end of this story, it was so tender and emotional. Very moving and true to life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in May you live all the days of your life
Death is horrible where loved
Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022
Death is horrible where loved ones are concerned, it must have been incredibly sad for Mary loosing John Charles, especially knowing how ill he was. Thank goodness she had her daughter Mary, along with Charles and Walter, at least that must have...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 27
Enchanting to read as always
Posted on Sat, 05 Mar 2022
Enchanting to read as always Penny.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 25
Hi Jane.
Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022
I'm so into this story, and just love the dream sequence...or was it all a dream? ...
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (14) - The Bends
Good morning Rhiannon,
Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022
Such a treasure to see so many snowdrops. I just love your metaphor for the trunks of trees too.
I've not seen any snowdrops so far this year, so it was a pleasure to read your poem and gaze at the beautiful photos.
Jenny....
Read full commentPosted in More Snowdrops ! (hidden away)
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