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My stories

Journeying

What difference made by passing gong? … our foolish fritterings don’t repeat.
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Spaceship Food

a rework of a piece for an IP a long time ago on ‘Skeuomorphism'*
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Why Bethlehem's remembered

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Now Bethlehem’s remembered throughout the ages vast, for there the Prince was born whose just government...

From Purity to Mess, to bless

… And now He can burst into any man or woman flood out the strife and mess distress and selfishness with joy and Life.
Cherry

The exact time for dozing!

[This is a freshened up old one] The clock was slightly slow … He bought a clock that could compute … dozing, reading, time drifts by
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Nice to see you back. Your

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

Nice to see you back. Your verse has a dreamy quality somehow, of persevering when the way has been hard, but there is comfort and some stability, and enjoyment in the surroundings even in the dark and rainy days.

I do like the 'fat...

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Posted in Gloaming

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To have voice recordings, not

Posted on Sat, 04 Jun 2016

To have voice recordings, not just photographs, must be rather nice, and I suppose especially something personal and memorable like that. Rhiannon

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Posted in Drive carefully

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Another marathon, Terry. I

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2016

Another marathon, Terry. I get the impression it must be very satisfying to get all that rhythm and rhyme of words flowing, whatever the meaning.

As you know surreal isn't my medium, and I tend to try to work out every detail that's going...

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Posted in Rough Roads To Roam (Poetry Monthly)

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But you had enjoyed the

Posted on Wed, 27 Apr 2016

But you had enjoyed the sharing and the watching, and stimulating each other's thinking of such things. As for eternity, I'm sure the new creation will have just as wonderful things to marvel at! Rhiannon

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Posted in T'is the Season...

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"Sometimes I sits and thinks,

Posted on Tue, 26 Apr 2016

"Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits…" or 'Stop the world, I want to get off, for a minute!'
Seriously, a nice picture of relaxation. Rhiannon

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Posted in Can I Just be...

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How you picture the flashing

Posted on Mon, 25 Apr 2016

How you picture the flashing thoughts filming through the mind in a second.

Lovely last two lines. Rhiannon

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Posted in Diagnosis a True Beginning

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Evokes the warmth and

Posted on Fri, 22 Apr 2016

Evokes the warmth and relaxation and hum of a summer day, where so much is growing and fruitful and living anew. Rhiannon

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Posted in Where the Bee Sucks

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Thank you for the reminder

Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2016

Thank you for the reminder that it is Parkinson's Awareness Week, and for the perseverance of the two of you, and your daughter's input and willingness in the background. As you say, the brain is such a complex organ, and there seem to be...

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Posted in Exactly What is Parkinson's, Anyway?

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I've just noticed the 'Poetry

Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016

I've just noticed the 'Poetry Monthly' section, and so noticed this. You've packed a lot in cleverly. I don't agree with evolutionary assumptions, but in a now 'fallen/damaged' world the poor housefly does show us such a mixture of beauty and...

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Posted in Musca Domestica (Poetry Monthly)

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Chock-full to bursting with

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016

Chock-full to bursting with so much to think about, things to laugh about, things to appreciate of your struggles, be drawn back with you to happy memories of young-mother days (but long forgotten the struggles and insecurities of those times)....

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Posted in Not Quite Fern Hill (Poetry Monthly)

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