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Chances ( 2)
It was time to tell Bobby Philips my story. “I work for a company called Bullen, Weisman and Stokes, three old gentlemen, all in their eighties. They...
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Chances ( 1)
A SHORT STORY IN TWO PARTS. I like to take chances. Some pay off and some don’t. But as my dear old dad used to say “You’ll never know, unless you...
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Security At A Price.
It started last summer. Young Jimmy Parker was attacked while doing his paper round early one Friday morning. Two teenagers knocked him off his bike...
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Monroe ( 10)
Frank returned to his bottle of wine and poured another glass. As much as he wanted to go to the scene of the fire and speak with the Officer In...
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Monroe ( 9)
The team weren’t best pleased about handing over the case to Anti Terrorism, but Frank explained there was nothing they could do about it. Thomas...
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I too found this fascinating.
Posted on Fri, 28 Sep 2018
I too found this fascinating. A real insight into something I know very little about. Onto the new post. Great read!
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (excerpt)
Hi Elsie, so sorry for your
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Hi Elsie, so sorry for your loss. I've read this again today and it is such a strong and thoughtful voice and a tribute to your Dad. Kind Regards, Joe.
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
It needs a bit of editing,
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2016
It needs a bit of editing, but I loved the story line. You've captured something that a lot of people are experiencing. There are some bits that need explaining in a short like this ( unless it's going to be much longer). Why did he stop...
Read full commentPosted in The Food Bank
Funnily enough....no.
Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016
Funnily enough....no.
Read full commentPosted in A Fathers Advice.
Oh yeh. It's to die for...
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2016
Oh yeh. It's to die for...
Read full commentPosted in Billy Greaves Secret.
Each time I read this I see
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016
Each time I read this I see something new. So many great lines in this. And the ending just grabs you! Many thanks for entering the Comp.
Read full commentPosted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.
Hi Roy, must have read this a
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016
Hi Roy, must have read this a dozen times. Love to hear it read out loud, whilst drinking a pint! Thanks for the entry.
Read full commentPosted in Life in old London Town (London Comp)
Razor sharp and gritty. A
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016
Razor sharp and gritty. A story within a poem. Nice work.
Read full commentPosted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.
A great vivid chunk of
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
A great vivid chunk of everyday rush hour train journeys! Great read.
Read full commentPosted in District Line ( London competition)
I agree with everything that
Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016
I agree with everything that's been said before. This would make a great start to something much bigger. You have us all hooked by this, we want more of it. But then we're all very greedy people! Loved it. Great read. Fully deserved Golden...
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