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| Story | Can We Bleed? | Jessiibear | 6 | 1 month 1 week ago |
| Story | Planet Prison | Jessiibear | 2 | 1 month 1 week ago |
| Story | 10 Life Lessons. Number 2. | jolono | 11 | 1 month 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Playing at Ghosts | julia_bless | 4 | 1 month 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Rest of My Life: Topsy | HarryC | 4 | 1 month 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Rest of My Life: Retirement Day! | HarryC | 13 | 1 month 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Ladies Night At The Palace | jolono | 6 | 1 month 2 weeks ago |
| Story | J. C. Jones | hudsonmoon | 22 | 2 months 22 hours ago |
| Story | School Reunion | skinner_jennifer | 19 | 2 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | Lenny Knows Dogs | jolono | 8 | 3 months 2 days ago |
| Story | A Stop at Staunton's | jxmartin | 4 | 3 months 1 week ago |
| Story | A Reason To Find The Will To Live | mcscraic | 4 | 3 months 3 weeks ago |
| Story | A series of horses decreasing in size | lavadis | 14 | 4 months 1 day ago |
| Story | The Speedy ( Part 3 ) Final | jolono | 13 | 4 months 5 days ago |
| Story | Bright Side Of Life | skinner_jennifer | 25 | 4 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Steelie 4 | celticman | 11 | 4 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Head Boy | Caldwell | 8 | 4 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Having perhaps the better claim | Itane Vero | 8 | 4 months 1 week ago |
| Story | Remnants | queen beatle | 5 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Steel Makers | jxmartin | 5 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | The Speedy ( Part 1) | jolono | 17 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Steelie 3 | celticman | 15 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Joyful Reunion at a (double) funeral! | Rhiannonw | 6 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Snow | Ed Crane | 15 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
| Story | Steelie 2 | celticman | 10 | 4 months 2 weeks ago |
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10 Life Lessons. Number 7.
A few weeks after my ninth birthday, and with money desperately tight, Dad finally gave his permission for mum to get a job. I know that sounds...
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10 Life Lessons. Number 6.
The most important place in the school was “The Hall”. We had our morning assembly in “The Hall”. We had our school dinners in “The Hall” And we also...
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10 Life Lessons. Number 5.
My first teacher in the juniors was Mrs Burt. Mrs Burt didn’t like me. But, to be honest, I can understand why. There wasn’t much she could teach me...
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10 Life Lessons. Number 4.
Dad kept Pigeons. At the bottom of our tiny garden was a Pigeon Loft. Dad raced them, as did my Grandad and my Uncle George. Pigeon racing was...
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10 Life Lessons. Number 3.
We’ve always had dogs. The first dog I remember was a mongrel called Butch. We went as a family to get him from a neighbour's house. Their dog had...
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Mate, can't wait for the next
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
Mate, can't wait for the next bit. You've created a character right there in just a few hundred words. I feel I know him, this could be a novel. Keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow Jess, this is deep. I've
Posted on Fri, 16 May 2025
Wow Jess, this is deep. I've read it numerous times and I'm still trying to work it out. I'm now thinking its a robot of some kind? But in the form of someone you loved? It's kept me guessing, which is a good thing! Whatever it is, it's good....
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Hi Jess! Of course I remember
Posted on Thu, 15 May 2025
Hi Jess! Of course I remember you. You wrote a great story called "Searching You" which I loved. Thank you so much for the kind words. Hope you're doing okay. You've obviously kept up with your writing ( I must go and have a look at your recent...
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Brought a smile to my face
Posted on Mon, 12 May 2025
Brought a smile to my face for many reasons. Firstly because it's obvious that you loved where you worked and not many people can say that anymore. Secondly, because you're about to start a new phase of your life and that's a good thing. I've...
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Hi Mate, loved this. Brought
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Hi Mate, loved this. Brought back memories. Mr Whittle with his oversized slipper, Mrs Harvey with the palm of her hand, Mr Bush with his cane, Mr Charman with the board rubber. I was hit with all of these. I can smile and laugh about it, but...
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Made me smile. A good day, I
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Made me smile. A good day, I think we all had those, when we suddenly felt part of "The Gang", even if it didn't last for long! Nice read Caldwell.
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Great story Itane Vero, I was
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
Great story Itane Vero, I was routing for him right from the start. You created a character that the reader can relate to and sympathise with very quickly. Maybe a part 2?
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Liked this Ed. You open with
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025
Liked this Ed. You open with drifting icy kapok. Great imagery that sets the scene for the rest of the poem. Trees looking like fairy cakes, weeping cars... whats not to like? Great poem mate.
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Hi Di, I just had this idea
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2025
Hi Di, I just had this idea that maybe this long last watch was just hanging about somewhere with everyone thinking it was a fake. Its a true story about the watch. It was Buzz Aldrins and it has been missing since 1970!
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Wow, there's a lot going on
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2025
Wow, there's a lot going on here. Electric Radiator, Dogs deep bark, and then my favoutite. Mossy tiles and piano keys, what a great description and for me, a visualistion. I have mossy tile on my roof! And when it rains it does seem like a tune...
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