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Monroe (5)

By jolono on Tue, 16 Oct 2018

Both Frank and Terry looked at the photo of Thomas Sago on the whiteboard and then back to the video. Yep, it was him. No doubt about it. Sandra...
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Monroe (4)

By jolono on Mon, 15 Oct 2018

Terry Walters was ambitious. A Detective Constable at thirty-four with his sights set firmly on being a DCI by the time he was forty. That was now...
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Monroe (3)

By jolono on Sat, 13 Oct 2018

Mark Latham arrived at St Leonards primary school at 10.55. He walked up to a small reception area and waited for a petite middle-aged woman to stop...
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Monroe ( 2)

By jolono on Fri, 12 Oct 2018

The Metropolitan Police were going through change. Lots of local stations were closing, being sold off and converted into flats others were being...
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Monroe ( Part 1)

By jolono on Thu, 11 Oct 2018

Not sure if this has legs or not... Frank was awake. He’d been laying there in the darkness for over half an hour. The Smiths from the flat next door...
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102 of my comments have received 109 Great Feedback votes

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Sorry Bee came late to this.

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

Sorry Bee came late to this. Could be read in two ways, taking the piss out of yourself or seriously! I think there is a bit of both in this and THAT'S why it's so good.

This stanza was brilliant, it has such rhythm.

Poetically...

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Posted in Once I Was A Poet

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Really like this Tina, like

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014

Really like this Tina, like Scratch, I was expecting a poem, but this piece of Prose is brilliant. Love the narrative running through it. Thought at first she was going to have a go at him, then you suprise us with his story. A feeling of love...

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Posted in Fergal's Wake (I.P.)

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Read both of these adventures

Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2014

Read both of these adventures CM and found myself laughing when I am usually desperately trying to keep quiet. It's just after 6am and my wife is still asleep upstairs. I laughed out loud at the cheese sandwich saga, the dog barked and i can now...

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Posted in Unbounders Away 2

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I have come late to this Luke

Posted on Sat, 24 May 2014

I have come late to this Luke, but became hooked with it after just a few lines on part one. Have now read all four this morning. You have created a new world in this story, a weird, crazy, yet believable world, not an easy thing to do. Great...

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Posted in The Final Journals of Dr. Peter Lurneman (Journal IV)

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A massive warm welcome to the

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014

A massive warm welcome to the site Stuart. Only read two of your pieces so far and both were good. But this...this is stunning. You have a talent for building a story with creative and superb narrative. This is one of the best things I've read on...

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Posted in edges

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I really liked this. I liked

Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2014

I really liked this. I liked the way it slowly built up. From the first line about hitting his girlfriend to shagging all the drunk slags in Ibiza, it told a great story about Daniel and the kind of man he was. And all this built around a one...

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Posted in half a man

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I love this CM. Wish I'd

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014

I love this CM. Wish I'd wrote it! It has just the right amount of humour and yet there is a message in their somewhere...

Read it twice now. Wherever Balloch is sounds like a million miles away so seven hours round trip is pretty fast.

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Posted in happy chappy

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I like this. Never saw it

Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014

I like this. Never saw it coming until he was at the fridge talking to her. I like the paragraph where you describe the sky as being bruised and the sirens yodel off into the distance. Great lines.

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Posted in Kessler's Love

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Like this alphadog. Says so

Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014

Like this alphadog. Says so much without being graphic. Nice one.

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Posted in waters of love

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Hi mate, hope you're well.

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2014

Hi mate, hope you're well. This was a triumph of poetry madness. Exactly what I want from a Lavadis piece! Witty, intelligent, original, zany yet beautifully wonderful in its extremes.

Loved it.

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