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Room 7. ( Kiss Chase)
When I was seven years old I played “Kiss Chase”. I chased the girls and when I caught them we kissed. They were easy to catch because they wanted to...
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Room 7. ( Alan and Gerald)
“You’re on the ground floor madam. Room 7. Straight along the corridor and it’s the third room on the right. Welcome to The Wentworth.” The young...
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Room 7. ( Anita)
Working on a series of stories all centred around one room in a certain Hotel. Room 7. ( Yes I know its been done before, but what the hell...) The...
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Swimming In The Rain
That summer. How can I describe that summer? The word “Perfect” seems appropriate. I was thirteen and on holiday with my parents in a beat up old...
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Eleven Plus and Me.
Seeing the GCSE results on the TV today reminded me of an exam I took in 1969. It was the Eleven- plus. I was a bright kid at eight and nine and when...
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For some strange reason i
Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014
For some strange reason i really liked this. Not because it isnt good but because its not usually my kind of thing. But the writing is good and honest and somewhere struck a chord.
Nice piece.
Read full commentPosted in A Flake of Your Life
This is really well put
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014
This is really well put together Frankle, enjoyed every word, and so true.
Read full commentPosted in Birth
This is crying out for a
Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014
This is crying out for a follow up PS. Like to read more of it.
Read full commentPosted in The Turnip Eaters
Sorry Bee came late to this.
Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014
Sorry Bee came late to this. Could be read in two ways, taking the piss out of yourself or seriously! I think there is a bit of both in this and THAT'S why it's so good.
This stanza was brilliant, it has such rhythm.
Poetically...
Read full commentPosted in Once I Was A Poet
Really like this Tina, like
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2014
Really like this Tina, like Scratch, I was expecting a poem, but this piece of Prose is brilliant. Love the narrative running through it. Thought at first she was going to have a go at him, then you suprise us with his story. A feeling of love...
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Read both of these adventures
Posted on Sat, 14 Jun 2014
Read both of these adventures CM and found myself laughing when I am usually desperately trying to keep quiet. It's just after 6am and my wife is still asleep upstairs. I laughed out loud at the cheese sandwich saga, the dog barked and i can now...
Read full commentPosted in Unbounders Away 2
I have come late to this Luke
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2014
I have come late to this Luke, but became hooked with it after just a few lines on part one. Have now read all four this morning. You have created a new world in this story, a weird, crazy, yet believable world, not an easy thing to do. Great...
Read full commentPosted in The Final Journals of Dr. Peter Lurneman (Journal IV)
A massive warm welcome to the
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
A massive warm welcome to the site Stuart. Only read two of your pieces so far and both were good. But this...this is stunning. You have a talent for building a story with creative and superb narrative. This is one of the best things I've read on...
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I really liked this. I liked
Posted on Wed, 09 Apr 2014
I really liked this. I liked the way it slowly built up. From the first line about hitting his girlfriend to shagging all the drunk slags in Ibiza, it told a great story about Daniel and the kind of man he was. And all this built around a one...
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I love this CM. Wish I'd
Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2014
I love this CM. Wish I'd wrote it! It has just the right amount of humour and yet there is a message in their somewhere...
Read it twice now. Wherever Balloch is sounds like a million miles away so seven hours round trip is pretty fast.
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