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Gabby

By jolono on Thu, 28 Dec 2017

In December 1976, me and my best mate Ray were squatting in a disused terraced house in Hanbury Street just behind Brick Lane in East London. The...

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Room 7. ( Kiss Chase)

By jolono on Wed, 01 Nov 2017

When I was seven years old I played “Kiss Chase”. I chased the girls and when I caught them we kissed. They were easy to catch because they wanted to...

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Room 7. ( Alan and Gerald)

By jolono on Fri, 27 Oct 2017

“You’re on the ground floor madam. Room 7. Straight along the corridor and it’s the third room on the right. Welcome to The Wentworth.” The young...

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Room 7. ( Anita)

By jolono on Mon, 23 Oct 2017

Working on a series of stories all centred around one room in a certain Hotel. Room 7. ( Yes I know its been done before, but what the hell...) The...

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A big warm welcome to the

Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015

A big warm welcome to the site Riss Ryker. Enjoyed this very much. Some great lines, in fact too many to mention. Also loved the last three lines in which you sum up the whole thing. Great start.

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A big warm welcome to the

Posted on Wed, 21 Jan 2015

A big warm welcome to the site JD. Liked this story a lot. I thought the worst, then thought it would all be okay, then BANG, the worst again. I like that kinda story...Look forward to reading more of your work.

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Nice rhythm to this and i

Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015

Nice rhythm to this and i loved the line " added weight to out love waistlines."

Really good.

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Really liked this edithrose.

Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015

Really liked this edithrose. Hope turns into all too common disappointment!

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Great writing Markle. I know

Posted on Wed, 31 Dec 2014

Great writing Markle. I know the area well. Its a place that I grew up in and still spend most of my days either walking or driving through. As a kid I fished the canal. There were tons of fish and a good deal of Pike. In fact many years ago we...

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Love it, love it, love it!

Posted on Mon, 22 Dec 2014

Love it, love it, love it! The writing is so good that I found myself reading it at such a pace that i got outa breath! Theres an urgency to the way Craven talks thats infectious. You find yourself reading it in a New York accent at a million...

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Alvin, once again I'm amazed

Posted on Wed, 26 Nov 2014

Alvin, once again I'm amazed at the consistency of your poetry. Week after week you give us great treats with your fantastic poems. I, for one, say thank you. I enjoy every one of them.

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He's my hero....

Posted on Wed, 15 Jan 2014

He's my hero....

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Fuck me CM this is so deep I

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

Fuck me CM this is so deep I could drown in it. I mean that in a good way!

There is a sense all the way through of movement. Trying to move on yet being pulled back time after time. Blighters has this nailed on. Brilliant is not an over...

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For some strange reason i

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014

For some strange reason i really liked this. Not because it isnt good but because its not usually my kind of thing. But the writing is good and honest and somewhere struck a chord.

Nice piece.