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Monroe (6)
After a short break, Monroe is back trying to solve the case of Thomas Sago. Frank was on his way to 62 Claremont Road, Forest Gate, the home address...
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Mr Russ.
I don’t have any War Medals from relatives. Dad did National Service in 1950, but was too young to serve in WW2. My Granddads were too young for WW1...
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Monroe (5)
Both Frank and Terry looked at the photo of Thomas Sago on the whiteboard and then back to the video. Yep, it was him. No doubt about it. Sandra...
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Monroe (4)
Terry Walters was ambitious. A Detective Constable at thirty-four with his sights set firmly on being a DCI by the time he was forty. That was now...
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Monroe (3)
Mark Latham arrived at St Leonards primary school at 10.55. He walked up to a small reception area and waited for a petite middle-aged woman to stop...
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A big warm welcome to the
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
A big warm welcome to the site. Best thing I've read in ages. SOOOOOOOOOOO beleivable. Saw the characters as I read it. And...who the fuck is Alfie! Or should I say, "Whats it all about Alfie".
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Fabulous piece of writing.
Posted on Fri, 03 Jul 2015
Fabulous piece of writing. Read it twice and kept going back to look at the photo so i could recognise the people. Honest, witty, and compulsive reading.
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Ahh, my favourite year 1976.
Posted on Wed, 17 Jun 2015
Ahh, my favourite year 1976. It must have been a year for middle aged men to have "that" moment. My Dad who was 43 with grey hair suddenly decided to have his hair "tinted". I came home from work to find a brown haired man at the kitchen table....
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A big warm welcome to the
Posted on Wed, 03 Jun 2015
A big warm welcome to the site snichols. Great start. I liked the way you have put a capital H every time you use the word Her. Makes us say the word different, which I suppose is the point of the whole poem. Very sad subject but brilliantly...
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You've written this so well
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2015
You've written this so well that I feel I've known Kati for years. Relaxed, easy writing style that draws you in and you become absorbed by it. Really, really, enjoyed this. More please!
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Posted on Sun, 24 May 2015
This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the day! Get a great reading recommendation every day.
Read full commentPosted in They Called Him a Tramp. I Called Him Joe
He's back! My favourite
Posted on Thu, 07 May 2015
He's back! My favourite Detective ( kinda). Fabulous dialogue Rich. I can actually see them now. They live in my brain...
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Life, told so superbly with
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2015
Life, told so superbly with berries and wasps! I've read it a few times now and each time see something new in it! That's my criteria for a great poem. Great stuff...
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Really good Hayley. There is
Posted on Sun, 01 Feb 2015
Really good Hayley. There is a sense of "tension" running all through this. The reader feels "uncomfortable" for Clare. She's trying to fit in and become one of the gang but takes no real pleasure in it. We've all been there, both male and...
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A big warm welcome to the
Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015
A big warm welcome to the site Riss Ryker. Enjoyed this very much. Some great lines, in fact too many to mention. Also loved the last three lines in which you sum up the whole thing. Great start.
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