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My stories

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Room 7. ( Alan and Gerald)

“You’re on the ground floor madam. Room 7. Straight along the corridor and it’s the third room on the right. Welcome to The Wentworth.” The young...
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Room 7. ( Anita)

Working on a series of stories all centred around one room in a certain Hotel. Room 7. ( Yes I know its been done before, but what the hell...) The...
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Swimming In The Rain

That summer. How can I describe that summer? The word “Perfect” seems appropriate. I was thirteen and on holiday with my parents in a beat up old...
Cherry

Eleven Plus and Me.

Seeing the GCSE results on the TV today reminded me of an exam I took in 1969. It was the Eleven- plus. I was a bright kid at eight and nine and when...

Drinks and Nibbles

“It’s nearly eight o’clock love. They’ll be here in a minute!” John shouted up the stairs to his wife Sarah. She’d been getting ready for over an...

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82 of my comments have received 88 Great Feedback votes

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Brought a picture into my

Posted on Tue, 20 Jan 2015

Brought a picture into my mind. Lovely descriptions.

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Posted in This morning I passed

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Nice rhythm to this and i

Posted on Fri, 16 Jan 2015

Nice rhythm to this and i loved the line " added weight to out love waistlines."

Really good.

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Posted in Brolga Dance

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Really liked this edithrose.

Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015

Really liked this edithrose. Hope turns into all too common disappointment!

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Posted in You promised

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Great writing Markle. I know

Posted on Wed, 31 Dec 2014

Great writing Markle. I know the area well. Its a place that I grew up in and still spend most of my days either walking or driving through. As a kid I fished the canal. There were tons of fish and a good deal of Pike. In fact many years ago we...

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Posted in Low Water - The Draining of Regents Canal

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Love it, love it, love it!

Posted on Mon, 22 Dec 2014

Love it, love it, love it! The writing is so good that I found myself reading it at such a pace that i got outa breath! Theres an urgency to the way Craven talks thats infectious. You find yourself reading it in a New York accent at a million...

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Posted in Craven's Christmas Stollen - A Craven Danger Mystery

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Alvin, once again I'm amazed

Posted on Wed, 26 Nov 2014

Alvin, once again I'm amazed at the consistency of your poetry. Week after week you give us great treats with your fantastic poems. I, for one, say thank you. I enjoy every one of them.

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Posted in LOOK INSIDE

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He's my hero....

Posted on Wed, 15 Jan 2014

He's my hero....

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Posted in Who is Jack Winter ( Part 2)

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Fuck me CM this is so deep I

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

Fuck me CM this is so deep I could drown in it. I mean that in a good way!

There is a sense all the way through of movement. Trying to move on yet being pulled back time after time. Blighters has this nailed on. Brilliant is not an over...

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Posted in Radio static

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For some strange reason i

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014

For some strange reason i really liked this. Not because it isnt good but because its not usually my kind of thing. But the writing is good and honest and somewhere struck a chord.

Nice piece.

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Posted in A Flake of Your Life

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This is really well put

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014

This is really well put together Frankle, enjoyed every word, and so true.

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