The most important place in the school was “The Hall”. We had our morning assembly in “The Hall”. We had our school dinners in “The Hall” And we also...
My first teacher in the juniors was Mrs Burt. Mrs Burt didn’t like me. But, to be honest, I can understand why. There wasn’t much she could teach me...
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A lot to like about this Ewan
Posted on Thu, 03 Jan 2019
A lot to like about this Ewan. Red corduroyed legs scissor past, in pursuit of nylon smoothed limbs...is a favourite. But I also never thought I'd see the name Huawei in a poem! Great stuff mate.
Another fascinating read. Enlightening for me who knows nothing about the condition. We're about the same age so I can imagine how difficult it must have been at School and going through those teenage years when everyone wants to be "accepted...
Hi Elsie, so sorry for your loss. I've read this again today and it is such a strong and thoughtful voice and a tribute to your Dad. Kind Regards, Joe.
It needs a bit of editing, but I loved the story line. You've captured something that a lot of people are experiencing. There are some bits that need explaining in a short like this ( unless it's going to be much longer). Why did he stop...
A lot to like about this Ewan
Posted on Thu, 03 Jan 2019
A lot to like about this Ewan. Red corduroyed legs scissor past, in pursuit of nylon smoothed limbs...is a favourite. But I also never thought I'd see the name Huawei in a poem! Great stuff mate.
Read full commentPosted in Outside In
Another fascinating read.
Posted on Sat, 29 Sep 2018
Another fascinating read. Enlightening for me who knows nothing about the condition. We're about the same age so I can imagine how difficult it must have been at School and going through those teenage years when everyone wants to be "accepted...
Read full commentPosted in A Martian in the Closet
I too found this fascinating.
Posted on Fri, 28 Sep 2018
I too found this fascinating. A real insight into something I know very little about. Onto the new post. Great read!
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (excerpt)
Hi Elsie, so sorry for your
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
Hi Elsie, so sorry for your loss. I've read this again today and it is such a strong and thoughtful voice and a tribute to your Dad. Kind Regards, Joe.
Read full commentPosted in Shlamek
It needs a bit of editing,
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2016
It needs a bit of editing, but I loved the story line. You've captured something that a lot of people are experiencing. There are some bits that need explaining in a short like this ( unless it's going to be much longer). Why did he stop...
Read full commentPosted in The Food Bank
Funnily enough....no.
Posted on Tue, 15 Nov 2016
Funnily enough....no.
Read full commentPosted in A Fathers Advice.
Oh yeh. It's to die for...
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2016
Oh yeh. It's to die for...
Read full commentPosted in Billy Greaves Secret.
Each time I read this I see
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016
Each time I read this I see something new. So many great lines in this. And the ending just grabs you! Many thanks for entering the Comp.
Read full commentPosted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.
Hi Roy, must have read this a
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016
Hi Roy, must have read this a dozen times. Love to hear it read out loud, whilst drinking a pint! Thanks for the entry.
Read full commentPosted in Life in old London Town (London Comp)
Razor sharp and gritty. A
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016
Razor sharp and gritty. A story within a poem. Nice work.
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