Jane Hyphen

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StoryJulia sylviec46 years 3 months ago
Storythe train leaving now Di_Hard156 years 3 months ago
StoryDark Rooms Jane Hyphen116 years 3 months ago
StoryThe Lost Children harveyjoseph76 years 3 months ago
StoryConfronting Demons skinner_jennifer226 years 4 months ago
StoryMy Favourite Colour's Changed Jane Hyphen46 years 4 months ago
Story???? … Rhiannonw116 years 4 months ago
StoryWe are Rocks Jane Hyphen86 years 4 months ago
StoryMusical Associations X3 Rhiannonw66 years 4 months ago
StoryMum's Old Jumper rosaliekempthorne66 years 4 months ago
StoryAn Unfinished Symphony luigi_pagano46 years 4 months ago
StoryBog Brilliance Rhiannonw116 years 5 months ago
StoryI Didn't Kill the Scarlet Beetles Jane Hyphen66 years 5 months ago
StoryAnthony and Cleopatra Jane Hyphen176 years 5 months ago
StorySomewhere Lake skinner_jennifer146 years 5 months ago
StoryI Woke Up (in inverted commas) Jane Hyphen156 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Identity of the Potato and the Swan pepsoid56 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Creaky Chair beco9966 years 5 months ago
StoryAn unsought win Rhiannonw116 years 5 months ago
StoryOn The Ground forest_for_ever46 years 5 months ago
StoryArrival – Evening Wander Rhiannonw156 years 5 months ago
StoryI won't leave my Walled Garden Jane Hyphen146 years 5 months ago
Storyrock Di_Hard136 years 5 months ago
StoryMiss You skinner_jennifer106 years 5 months ago
StoryOn the arbitrariness of life Parson Thru206 years 5 months ago

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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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The Legend of the Pah - 1 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘A vasectomy is the best gift a man can give to his wife…..Alistair, Alistair!’ ‘What?’ He said, without lifting his head. A spread of nails lay...
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The Wasted Wish

‘Go and shut up the chickens for the night, Mai, and when you get back your tea will be ready.’ Mai didn’t like shutting up the chickens by herself...
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Thank you so much L for

Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022

Thank you so much L for reading and commenting. I had to go back (far back) in time to find this voice and remember how much I wanted to resist everything than comes with becoming a woman. It didn't help having male relatives who were...

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Posted in Nil by Mouth

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that. smiley

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

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This is sweet and sour. I

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

This is sweet and sour. I enjoyed the descriptions of Cornwall here, so well done, especially the Hottentot Fig, once you learn that plant name, you never forget it. The energy and fearlessness of youth quickly expires but it sounds like your...

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Posted in Brief Moments To Imagine

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Wow, this is really sweet and

Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022

Wow, this is really sweet and touching. The lady in the photograph looks so happy. Music can be a medium for time travel. She must have so many wonderful memories.

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Posted in ‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Unfortunately, the dust went everywhere, into orrfices, penetrating mucous membranes and causing a distortion of the status quo.

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (7) - Sniffer Dogs

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You've captured the violence

Posted on Mon, 21 Feb 2022

You've captured the violence of a storm, the cleansing effect and resulting sense of something changed, a new beginning, a metaphor for so much. I love 'winds whipping spume' and the solitary egret - creepy how they take off and silently fly. 

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Posted in A Tempest Off Portishead

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That brought back memories,

Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022

That brought back memories, my mum had that book, I remember looking through it, and I've got the Oxfam Vegetarian Cookbook. I enjoyed reading this. Rhea getting so much comfort from Ebay trawling and flicking through recipe books, maybe filling...

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Posted in The Cookbook

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This is beautiful Di_Hard.

Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022

This is beautiful Di_Hard. The drama of these stormy February days together with quieter aspects of nature hiding in the woods, 'jade lichen, acid bright moss'. Somehow you've captured the time of year perfectly. Wonderful poem, loved reading it...

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Posted in February Rainbow

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Brilliant rhythm. Poor girl,

Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022

Brilliant rhythm. Poor girl, why are some people's lives so wretched? 'A twenty two year old has been' is stirring. I enjoyed the short poignant lines and the rhyming. It's like a series of strikes and mirrors that poor young lady's childhood.

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Posted in Her Troubles

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What a story and in it what

Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022

What a story and in it what lovely names and words. 'Legends expressed - myths reaching across time'. There is a beauty in the underworld, just as there is horror in nature. I love it when plants are linked to stories (& poems!). Some of...

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Posted in Poet's Narcissus

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