Jane Hyphen

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StoryStrange Beings in Strange Times Jane Hyphen85 years 4 months ago
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StoryOde to Compost Jane Hyphen115 years 4 months ago
StoryA Broken Pot’s Lament onemorething145 years 4 months ago
StoryPatience Ewan25 years 4 months ago
StoryChlorophyll Green Rhiannonw75 years 4 months ago
StoryImagine if we Didn't Feel Pain Jane Hyphen65 years 4 months ago
StoryI Saw You Jane Hyphen65 years 5 months ago
StoryJar of Lights Jane Hyphen85 years 5 months ago
StoryGordon Ramsay, A Lesson In Life. Part One. Maxine Jasmin-Green45 years 5 months ago
StoryEel onemorething95 years 5 months ago
StoryNearly Awake skinner_jennifer235 years 6 months ago
StoryGrey-Day rambling Rhiannonw185 years 6 months ago
Blog entryYou Never Know Who's Reading! Insertponceyfre...95 years 6 months ago
StoryBe Leave Di_Hard155 years 6 months ago
StoryThe emergency bassoonist lavadis55 years 7 months ago
StoryA Good Run agnosticnun45 years 7 months ago
StoryYoung at heart monodemo75 years 7 months ago
StoryChill Rhiannonw95 years 7 months ago
StoryThe Worst Jane Hyphen105 years 7 months ago
StoryAngel 81 (finding friends) celticman55 years 7 months ago
StoryAwoke, then awaking Rhiannonw55 years 7 months ago
Storyuntravelling path Di_Hard145 years 8 months ago
StorySnowdrops Rhiannonw75 years 8 months ago

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My stories

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You Looked Like You Had Lost

At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Right now it didn’t matter that he was growing older. The very act of starting up his old motor and taking it out felt rebellious and liberating, he...
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Jai

The early hours of the morning were a magic time, he felt, when most people exist in another realm, sleeping and oblivious. The world was an empty...
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Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘A parcel came for you,’ Lynne said dryly without looking up from her laptop. ‘Ah good, yes the new car battery for my old Audi.’ She glared at him...
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Pet Sounds

Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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521 of my comments have received 551 Great Feedback votes

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This is beautiful Di. The

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022

This is beautiful Di. The bright yellow against a blue sky is a wonderful tribute. The way you've described the scent of gorse brought back memories for me, of being in Wales near a beach when my children were small and we couldn't get over how...

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Posted in Win

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There's something intense

Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022

There's something intense about hands, our mother's hands in particular, hands that kept us alive as infants. A very moving poem.3

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Posted in These Hands

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That's pretty much it, in a

Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022

That's pretty much it, in a nutshell. Very scary that so few people have so much power and so much wealth, following the same pattern as everything else, big businesses taking over small ones, countries seeking to overpower smaller ones. What's...

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Posted in two men

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You've summed up just how

Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2022

You've summed up just how much everything has changed over the past week Jenny. The air feels different and spring seems to have burst out of its seems all of a sudden. I love 'not being a pigeon expert', made me smile. The birds bring so much a...

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Posted in Passing Time

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She still gets excited about

Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022

She still gets excited about smelling them - that's so sweet. It's hard to control your emotions, knowing what's ahead but by feeling sad about it you're depriving yourself some of the joy of still having them next to you. I know it's hard to be...

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Posted in Pet Sounds

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Fulfilling to read, such a

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022

Fulfilling to read, such a treat Di. I love 'bird song chips clear air', because they do, also love 'smelting life from light'. You've crammed so much quality in that I think I'll need to go back and re-read. 

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Posted in April shower

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I like the way you've woven

Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022

I like the way you've woven your adventures in the sensory experience; aromas, sounds, 'resembling a clutch of herbs'. Our brains seem to hang onto the sensory memories with astonishing accuracy, a song or the scent of a perfume acting as a time...

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Posted in Amongst The Memories

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I really enjoyed this poem,

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.

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Posted in Looking For God In The Woods

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I enjoyed this poetic take on

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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Anemone, what a beautiful

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment. 

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two

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