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StoryYou learn about the sunshine Jane Hyphen144 years 5 months ago
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StorySecret Lemonade Drinker Andy Hollyhead54 years 5 months ago
StoryYou Looked Like You Had Lost Jane Hyphen124 years 5 months ago
StoryCome meet the women of my land Magnolia Fay224 years 5 months ago
Story Climbing up from Minton Rhiannonw84 years 6 months ago
Storytwo men Di_Hard254 years 6 months ago
StoryJai Jane Hyphen104 years 6 months ago

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Parcel for you....Part 11

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 01 Jan 2024

‘Spencer?’ ‘Yes,’ ‘Come here!’ Vanessa listened as he walked to the hall and stood over her. ‘These cartridges,’ she said, holding one up without...
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Parcel for you...Part 10

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 15 Dec 2023

On the drive back from her mother’s house, a sense of guilt began to proliferate in the rear voids of Vanessa’s consciousness. At first she attempted...
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Brodie's Big Idea

By Jane Hyphen on Wed, 13 Dec 2023

‘I’m really impressed with what you’ve done in the garden, Brodie.’ Brodie flicked his oily hair and blinked, he didn’t like compliments. He already...
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Parcel for you ......Part 9

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 08 Dec 2023

Vanessa was perched on the edge of her bed, rifling through the bedside drawer, parting a sea of notebooks, pens, nail polishes, bank statements and...
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I went back to Birmingham

By Jane Hyphen on Thu, 07 Dec 2023

A brutalist and brutal poem. It's my hometown so I can.
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A sad but ultimately

Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024

A sad but ultimately satisfying second part, Paul. So nicely done. I can imagine the silence in their house and the welcome presence of the cat wandering in. I suppose you have to make allowances for people's coping strategies in such sorrowful...

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I couldn't agree more, Maxine

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

I couldn't agree more, Maxine. I get stressed about parking at the best of times so couple that with a trip to hospital and I would be experiencing a stomach-cramp inducing level of anxiety. There should be a free constant shuttle bus service...

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This is easy to read, classy

Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024

This is easy to read, classy and sort of meditative. It's a perfect short story. Takes me back to very middle-class homes I visited as a child where people were cultured and ate food I'd never heard of and had original artwork on the walls. It...

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I'm not sure what that lot

Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024

I'm not sure what that lot are or if they're even just holograms, such if their disconnection from society.

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I really like this, Rhiannon.

Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2024

I really like this, Rhiannon. It's easy to forget that farmers are up and out in all weathers, at all times helping nature along. Your words are soft and powerful here, much like the lamplight.

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I too love, 'birdsong ballads

Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024

I too love, 'birdsong ballads on barest branches'. It's something I've been noticing this week, the birds are celebrating day length. Peace is the greatest thing we can hope for and some sort of rebalancing in our economy. New year's eve truly...

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I've been brainwashed, Di. I

Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024

I've been brainwashed, Di. I'm smoking a cigar in some long glistening loafers as we speak, no socks mind, just a hint of tanned ankle.

Thank you for reading and your great compliment x

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That took a dark turn. I

Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024

That took a dark turn. I honestly thought this was a gentle peice about the Northern Lights, The part about the man in white fedora attacking a couple and biting them, it happens (a lot in Wales apparently). Then all sorts of carnage unfolding...

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A perfect storm in words. I

Posted on Wed, 03 Jan 2024

A perfect storm in words. I've just moved house and the sounds produced by the high winds are more alarming since I'm yet to figure out what's normal for the building. Awful damage for some out there. Let's hope for more peace and perhaps even...

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Your poem is very cleansing,

Posted on Wed, 13 Dec 2023

Your poem is very cleansing, Rhiannon. You've conveyed a strong sense of all that water rushing, studded with wintry natural features, tangled bare branches and leaf litter.

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